2020学年七年级英语下册Unit6I#039;mwatchingTV写作指导素材(新版)人教新目标版.docxVIP

Unit 6 rm watchi ng TV 写作指导 【写作任务】 假如你是王娜，下面是一张你和家人的照片。 你打算把这张照片通过电子邮件发给你的 美国笔友Tony,让他了解你的家庭。请你写一篇不少于 60词的短文对照片进行详细介绍, 一并发给Tony。 参考词汇： 荡秋千 play on the swi ng 长椅 bench 【任务分析】 该写作任务要求对图片内容进行描述， 属于看图写作。在描述图片内容时，可以按照从 左到右、从右到左、 由远及近或由近及远等顺序来写。对图中人物进行描述时，要把各自的 活动写清楚，使读者能清楚地知道你所描述的是哪个人物。时态可用现在进行时。 【学生习作】 Dear Tony, The boy in the photo is my brother. He is playing on the swing. He is only 5 years old. My pare nts are sitti ng on the ben ch. My father is talki ng to my brother and my mother is readi ng a book. She likes books about history best. The girl in the photo is me. I m eating an ice -cream. I love all kinds of ice-cream. This is my family. Yours, Wa ng Na 【习作点评】 该习作格式正确，表述得体，恰当地运用了现在进行时。 小作者对照片中每个家庭成员 的活动进行详细介绍的同时，还进行了适当发挥，交待了一些弟弟、妈妈及自己的信息。 如果能在开头和结尾加上总结性的话语，会使短文内容更完整。 【习作改进】 Dear Tony, Here is a photo of my family. We are having a good time. The boy is my brother. He is playing on the swing. He is only 5 years old. My parents are sitting on the ben ch. My father is talk ing to my brother and my mother is readi ng a book. She likes books about history best. The girl in the photo is me. I m eating an ice -cream. I love all kinds of ice-cream. This is my family. I love them. Yours, Wang Na