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十句法文章结构 ParaI S1 Topic S2 Different attitudes ParaII S3 Its advantages or one side’opinion S4 Detail 1 S5 Detail 2 S6 Transition（过渡） S7 Its disadvantages or the other side’opinion S8 Detail 1 S9 Detail 2 ParaIII S10 The balanced view 2006年高职考英语作文 假设你是一名职校学生,昨天就校服问题在自己班上进行了调查（survey），下面是调查的结果．请根据题目＂Report on the Survey about school uniforms”的报道. 参考词汇:clean and tidy,comfortable,be fit for,suit,feel equal,dislike,simple,style,out of fashion,bad quality, have no idea about 57% 36% 7% 喜欢穿校服 不喜欢穿校服 没什么看法 整洁大方,穿着舒适,适合运动,符合学生年龄特征,感觉平等 颜色单一,款式不时髦,质量差 范文赏析 Report on the survey about school uniforms Yesterday , I did a survey about our school uniforms. I asked my classmates what they thought about our uniforms. 57 percent of my classmates like them. They think the uniforms are very clean and tidy.They’re comfortable to wear and fit for sports. Also they suit the students very well. They say they feel equal when they wearing their school uniforms. However, 36 percent of them dislike the school uniforms. They consider the colors too simple and the style of them is out of fashion. What makes them unhappy most is the bad quality. 7 percent of them have no idea about them. 高考英语评分标准 第一档（16—20分） 能表达出全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连续流畅，表达清楚。 第二档（11—15分） 能表达大部分要点，语言基本无误，行文较连贯，表达清楚。 第三档（6—10分） 能表达小部分要点，语言有较多错误，影响意思表达。 第四档 （1—5分） 只能写出一些与内容有关的单词，严重影响意思表达。 第五档 （0分） 无内容或文章无关. 得分关键 高级词汇 复杂句 行文连贯 信息完整 书写工整 Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! ① This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② It has changed a lot since 1978 ③. People here ④ are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed