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精品文档 精品文档 PAGE PAGE4 精品文档 PAGE 年浙江卷纲要写作习作点评 第二节纲要写作（满分 25分） 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60词左右的内容纲要。 Parentseverywherepraisetheirkids.JennBerman,authorofTheAtoZGuidetoRaisingHappy andConfidentKids,says, “Weto’thevegoneoppositeextremeofafewdecadesagowhen parentstendedtobemorestrict. ”Bygivingkidsalotofpraise,parentsthinkthey ’re theirchildren ’sconfidence,when,infact,itmaybejusttheopposite.Toomuchpraisecan backfireand,whengiveninawaythatsinsincere,makekidsafraidtotrynewthingsortakearisk forfearofnotbeingabletostayontopwheretheirparents ’praisehasputthem. Still,don ’tgotoofarintheotherdirection.Notgivingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingas givingtoomuch.Kidswillfeellikethey ’renotgoodenoughorthatyoudon ’tcareand,as mayseenopointintryinghardfortheiraccomplishments. Sowhatistherightamountofpraise?Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthanthequantity.Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoften asyourchilddoessomethingthatdeservesaverbalreward. “Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeour children ’seffortstopushthemselvesandworkhardtoachieveagoal, ”saysDonahue,author ParentingWithoutFear:LettingGoofWorryandFocusingonWhatReallyMatters. “Onethin torememberisthatit ’stheprocessnottheendproductthatmatters. ” Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.Butifhe ’soutthereeverydayand playinghard,youshouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.Praisingtheeffortandnottheoutcomecanalsomeanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardtocleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.Butwhateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionate（相称的）totheamountofeffortyourchildhasputintoit. 下水作文 1 JayChen 个人简介：加拿大公立中学英语教师，华人，出生台湾， 7岁时随家人移居加拿大。 Althoughencouragementsprovideasenseofconfidence,overpraisingone unintendedoutcomes.Nevertheless,anabsence（absence,meaning the“factofsb/sthnot existingornotbeingavailable;alackofsth ”与原文的 notenough严重不一致） of  ’schildcouldleadto complimentwouldresultinapathy  （resultinapathy  的意思是父亲母亲不表扬就是冷不闻不问；而 原文  Kidswillfeelli