专题42【读后续写】题型增分攻略三解析版-2021年高考英语备考艺考生百日冲刺系列.docVIP

2021年高考英语备考艺考生百日冲刺系列 专题42 【读后续写】题型增分攻略三解析版 微技能4 情绪细节描写 技巧点拨 ①可以利用恰当的表情绪感受的形容词和副词，如快（happy，delighted， pleased，joyful，enjoyable 等）、吃惊（surprised，shocked，amazed，astonished) 这些直接描述人物的情绪或表情的形容词，或介词短语如 to one’s surprise，in relief，in panic等进行描写。 ②融情于景：利用自然环境描写体现人物的情绪感受，如小说《麦琪的礼物》中的 Della finished her crying and dried her face. She stood by the window and looked out unhappily at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.利用3个形容词gray体现了Della的难受和不开心。 ③利用恰当的动作描写反映人物的情绪，如下面文章片段中的句子。 精彩片段 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry(直接利用形容词说明Jane的愤怒） that she said to Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp and walked away.(用生动的短语体现Jane的愤怒） With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake.(动作描写，说明Jane 满怀期望）To her surprise, (利用介词短语体現Jane的吃惊）she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snow capped mountain top. (寓情于景，休现Jane的无望失落）She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!”she cried.“Help!” 微技能5 直接心理活动细节描写 在读后续写时，可以利用心理活动描写揭示人物的性格，反映人物的思想变化，推动情节的发展，丰富故事情节。 技巧点拨 ①可采用内心独白的方式，对自己说话或提问，直接描写人物的心理活动 ②也可利用 she sensed/she thought/she realized, there was a voice inside that, she heard a whispering voice from her heart, it hit/struck him that...等独白的形式描述人物的心理活动。 精彩片段 下面是欧亨利的作品《麦琪的礼物》中女主人公决定卖头发为丈夫Jim买礼物前的心理活动。 Della finished her crying and dried her face. She stood by the window and looked out unhappily at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard. “Tomorrow would be Christmas Day, and I have only one dollar and eighty-seven cents to buy Jim a gift. I have been saving every penny I could for months,with this result. Jim earned twenty dollars a week, which does not go far. Expenses had been greater than what I have expected, she whispered. “But I only ha