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怎样使句子简练利落 　　不是所有的长句都是罗唆的，也不是凡是短的句子都是洗练的。我们要尽量运用简练的句子；我们也要尽量把没有增添语意的词语去掉，并且将冗长句子节缩，使之简练利落。 　　我们可以从四方面着手： 一、消除多余的词语 　　每句话里的词藻或用语，如果对语意起不了作用就不要铺张，要给以铲除，因此(1)a-(7)a都嫌唠叨，要由(1)b-(7)b来取代： 　　(1)a. At this point of time →b. Now 　　(2)a. Bring all this to a conclusion. →b. Concluding this. 　　(3)a. Has a tendency to drop →b. Can drop easily. 　　(4)a. On account of the fact that... →b. As.../Since... 　　(5)a. Situated in the vicinity of... →b. near... 　　(6)a. June was detemined in her mind to ... →b. June was determind to .../ June decided to ... 　　(7)a. Here comes David, a person whom I ido