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写作规范练(六) (限时：35分钟) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 [2019·南昌一模]Nanchang International Marathon has held three times since 2016. I felt luckily enough to be chosen as a mini-marathon runner in last November. Lacked special training, I almost wanted to quit an event. On that day, I lined up with other 25, 000 runners, most of who were professional runners. Realizing running was a battle against me, I was ready to finish my first marathon. At mile 1, my leg were still comfortable. By mile 3, I got a pain in my ankle, and I kept going. With the finishing line ahead, I seem to feel faster than before. Actually, I got the same medal as the one the winner had! 答案与解析： Nanchang International Marathon has eq \o(∧,\s\do14(①been)) held three times since 2016. I felt eq \o(luckily,\s\do14(②lucky)) enough to be chosen as a mini-marathon runner in last November. eq \o(Lacked,\s\do14(④Lacking)) special training, I almost wanted to quit eq \o(an,\s\do14(⑤the)) event. On that day, I lined up with other 25, 000 runners, most of eq \o(who,\s\do14(⑥whom)) were professional runners. Realizing running was a battle against eq \o(me,\s\do14(⑦myself)) , I was ready to finish my first marathon. At mile 1, my eq \o(leg,\s\do14(⑧legs)) were still comfortable. By mile 3, I got a pain in my ankle, eq \o(and,\s\do14(⑨but)) I kept going. With the finishing line ahead, I eq \o(seem,\s\do14(⑩seemed)) to feel faster than before. Actually, I got the same medal as the one the winner had! ①has后加been　考查动词的语态。分析句子结构可知，句子的主语Nanchang International Marathon和谓语hold构成被动关系，应用be＋done的形式，且与完成时结构呼应，故在has后加been。 ②luckily改为lucky　考查形容词。feel是连系动词，后面跟形容词作表语，故用形容词lucky。 ③删除in　考查介词。last November意为“去年11月”，应单独使用，故删除in。 ④Lacked改为Lacking　考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，句子主语I和lack构成逻辑上的主谓关系，此处应是现在分词短