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写作规范练(二) (限时：35分钟) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 [2019·湖南长郡中学适应性考试]It is one of most exciting experiences in my life. My relationship with the motorcycles begin when I was a child. The feelings are difficultly to explain. There is an important difference among cars and motorcycles. Cars forgive mistakes, but motorcycles dont. There are two important period in my life relating to the motorcycles: the beginning and today. My father bought we a little motorcycle. My sisters and brother already knew how to ride motorcycles. I was at five years old, and I remember perfectly the first day which my father taught me to ride it. I was not afraid but I drove all afternoon on the tennis court. 答案与解析： It is one of eq \o(∧,\s\do14(①the)) most exciting experiences in my life. My relationship with the motorcycles eq \o(begin,\s\do14(②began)) when I was a child. The feelings are eq \o(difficultly,\s\do14(③difficult)) to explain. There is an important difference eq \o(among,\s\do14(④between)) cars and motorcycles. Cars forgive mistakes, but motorcycles dont. There are two important eq \o(period,\s\do14(⑤periods)) in my life eq \o(relating,\s\do14(⑥related)) to the motorcycles: the beginning and today. My father bought eq \o(we,\s\do14(⑦us)) a little motorcycle. My sisters and brother already knew how to ride motorcycles. I was at five years old, and I remember perfectly the first day eq \o(∧,\s\do14(⑨on)) eq \o(which,\s\do14(when)) my father taught me to ride it. I was not afraid eq \o(but,\s\do14(⑩and)) I drove all afternoon on the tennis court. ①在one of后加the　“one of the＋形容词的最高级＋名词复数”为固定搭配，意为“最……的……之一”，故在one of后加the。 ②begin改为began　根据后面的when I was a child可知，此处叙述发生在过去的事情，应用一般过去时，故将begin改为began。 ③difficultly改为difficult　此处应用形容词作表语，表示主语的状态或特征，故将difficult