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写作规范练(五) (限时：35分钟) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 [2019·唐山一模]I like seeing English movies. In my spare time, Id like to find and enjoying hot movies, among that The Lord of the Rings impresses me most. It has three series and I like both of them. Though the first volume was released on 2001, it is still not out of the date. In the movie, the scenery is so beautifully that I cant move my eyes away. It is shot in New Zealand but I decide to go there some day. It shows me a world science fiction, where there are all kinds of creature. Movies give me pleasure and enlarge my vision. 答案与解析： I like seeing English movies. In my spare time, Id like to find and eq \o(enjoying,\s\do14(①enjoy)) hot movies, among eq \o(that,\s\do14(②which)) The Lord of the Rings impresses me most. It has three series and I like eq \o(both,\s\do14(③all)) of them. Though the first volume was released eq \o(on,\s\do14(④in)) 2001, it is still not out of the date. In the movie, the scenery is so eq \o(beautifully,\s\do14(⑥beautiful)) that I cant move my eyes away. It eq \o(is,\s\do14(⑦was)) shot in New Zealand eq \o(but,\s\do14(⑧and)) I decide to go there some day. It shows me a world eq \o(∧,\s\do14(⑨of)) science fiction, where there are all kinds of eq \o(creature,\s\do14(⑩creatures)) . Movies give me pleasure and enlarge my vision. ①enjoying改为enjoy　本句谓语动词后的find与enjoy应是并列关系，would like to do sth.为固定用法，故将enjoying改为enjoy。 ②that改为which　分析句子结构可知，此处引导非限制性定语从句，hot movies为先行词，指物，引导词前有介词among，应用which引导该从句，故将that改为which。 ③both改为all　根据上文中提到的three series可知，《指环王》有三部，both指“两者”；all指“三者或三者以上”，所以此处应用all来指代，故将both改为all。 ④on改为in　年份前通常用介词in，故将on改为in。 ⑤删除the　out of date意为“过时”，是固定短语，故删除the。 ⑥beautifully改为beautiful　分析句子结构可知，此处作系动词is的表语，表示主语的状态或特征，应用形容词，故将beautifully改为beautiful。 ⑦is改为was　该系列电影于2001～