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写作规范练(七) (限时：35分钟) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 [2019·深圳市第一次调研]I have a dream to be a doctor. Three years ago, I am badly injured in car accident. The ambulance rushed me to the nearest hospital, that the doctors and nurses did their best to look after myself. Five days late, I was getting better. I watched the doctors to perform their duties tirelessly but offer all their patients the best treatment available. My experience in that hospital great influenced me. Since then, I have made it my lifes ambition to fight against diseases and save life. I know my dream will come true if I keep work hard for it. 答案与解析： I have a dream to be a doctor. Three years ago, I eq \o(am,\s\do14(①was )) badly injured in eq \o(∧,\s\do14(②a)) car accident. The ambulance rushed me to the nearest hospital, eq \o(that,\s\do14(③where)) the doctors and nurses did their best to look after eq \o(myself,\s\do14(④me)) . Five days eq \o(late,\s\do14(⑤later)) , I was getting better. I watched the doctors to perform their duties tirelessly eq \o(but,\s\do14(⑦and)) offer all their patients the best treatment available. My experience in that hospital eq \o(great,\s\do14(⑧greatly)) influenced me. Since then, I have made it my lifes ambition to fight against diseases and save eq \o(life,\s\do14(⑨lives)) . I know my dream will come true if I keep eq \o(work,\s\do14(⑩working)) hard for it. ①am改为was　根据本句中的时间状语Three years ago可知，时态应用一般过去时，故将am改为was。 ②在car前加a　此处泛指一次车祸，且accident为可数名词，故在car前加a。 ③that改为where　分析句子结构可知，本句为非限制性定语从句，先行词为the nearest hospital，表示地点，关系词在从句中作地点状语，应用关系副词where，故将that改为where。 ④myself改为me　此处表示医生和护士尽最大努力照顾“我”。此处作look after的宾语，应用宾格，主语和宾语并非同一人，不能用反身代词，故将myself改为me。 ⑤late改为later　句意为：五天后，我好多了。late意为“晚(的)；迟(的)”，later意为“随后；之后”。根据句意可知，此处应用later，故将late改为later。 ⑥删除to　watch sb. do