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写作规范练(七)
(限时:35分钟)
写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2019·深圳市第一次调研]I have a dream to be a doctor. Three years ago, I am badly injured in car accident. The ambulance rushed me to the nearest hospital, that the doctors and nurses did their best to look after myself. Five days late, I was getting better. I watched the doctors to perform their duties tirelessly but offer all their patients the best treatment available. My experience in that hospital great influenced me. Since then, I have made it my lifes ambition to fight against diseases and save life. I know my dream will come true if I keep work hard for it.
答案与解析:
I have a dream to be a doctor. Three years ago, I eq \o(am,\s\do14(①was )) badly injured in eq \o(∧,\s\do14(②a)) car accident. The ambulance rushed me to the nearest hospital, eq \o(that,\s\do14(③where)) the doctors and nurses did their best to look after eq \o(myself,\s\do14(④me)) . Five days eq \o(late,\s\do14(⑤later)) , I was getting better. I watched the doctors to perform their duties tirelessly eq \o(but,\s\do14(⑦and)) offer all their patients the best treatment available. My experience in that hospital eq \o(great,\s\do14(⑧greatly)) influenced me. Since then, I have made it my lifes ambition to fight against diseases and save eq \o(life,\s\do14(⑨lives)) . I know my dream will come true if I keep eq \o(work,\s\do14(⑩working)) hard for it.
①am改为was 根据本句中的时间状语Three years ago可知,时态应用一般过去时,故将am改为was。
②在car前加a 此处泛指一次车祸,且accident为可数名词,故在car前加a。
③that改为where 分析句子结构可知,本句为非限制性定语从句,先行词为the nearest hospital,表示地点,关系词在从句中作地点状语,应用关系副词where,故将that改为where。
④myself改为me 此处表示医生和护士尽最大努力照顾“我”。此处作look after的宾语,应用宾格,主语和宾语并非同一人,不能用反身代词,故将myself改为me。
⑤late改为later 句意为:五天后,我好多了。late意为“晚(的);迟(的)”,later意为“随后;之后”。根据句意可知,此处应用later,故将late改为later。
⑥删除to watch sb. do
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