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写作规范练(三) (限时：35分钟) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 [2019·潍坊高考模拟]Im delight to welcome you to our Wildlife Club. Youll be surprised that a various of plants and creatures are living here. Here are the most visited tourist sites. One of the pleasant place is Holland Common. This has been public land for two hundred of years, and that youll find interesting is that the River Ouse has its source in the Common. Theres information board about the plants and animals and the Common is accessibly 24 hours a day. Then there is Holl Island which was noted for its great range of trees. It is open only from Friday to Sunday because its quite small, but if there were people around every day, many of the wildlife would keep away. Have a good time here! 答案与解析： Im eq \o(delight,\s\do14(①delighted)) to welcome you to our Wildlife Club. Youll be surprised that a eq \o(various,\s\do14(②variety)) of plants and creatures are living here. Here are the most visited tourist sites. One of the pleasant eq \o(place,\s\do14(③places)) is Holland Common. This has been public land for two hundred of years, and eq \o(that,\s\do14(⑤what)) youll find interesting is that the River Ouse has its source in the Common. Theres eq \o(∧,\s\do14(⑥an)) information board about the plants and animals and the Common is eq \o(accessibly,\s\do14(⑦accessible)) 24 hours a day. Then there is Holl Island which eq \o(was,\s\do14(⑧is)) noted for its great range of trees. It is open only from Friday to Sunday because its quite small, eq \o(but,\s\do14(⑨and)) if there were people around every day, eq \o(many,\s\do14(⑩much)) of the wildlife would keep away. Have a good time here! ①delight改为delighted　此处形容主语I的感受，修饰人应该用-ed形式的形容词delighted，故将delight改为delighted。 ②various改为variety　a variety of＝va