“读后续写”（2016年浙江卷真题）讲解课件-高三英语二轮复习.pptxVIP

续写读后县长在全县审计工作会议上的发言_1县长在全县审计工作会议上的讲话同志们:县委、县政府决定召开审计工作会议,主要目的是进一步提高对审计工作的认识,把我们各部门、各单位、各街镇的思想统一到县委、县政府的要求上来,高度重视审计工作,主动配合审计工作,确保我们有限的财政资金能够用好,用出成效。这次会议的主要任务是总结近年来全县审计工作,安排部署今年审计工作任务。这次会议非常重要,在央要求转变工作作风,尽量压缩会议的大背景下,我们其他方面的业务会议都进行了认真整合、压缩、合并,就审计工作专门召开一次会议,这可见县委、县政府对审计工作的高度重视。刚才云生同志代表县委、县政府对审计工作作了认真的回顾总结,同时也安排了今年的审计工作任务,应该说云生同志的讲话不仅总结了我们这些年的审计工作,肯定了审计工作取得的成效、发挥的作用,同时实事求是地对我们这些年来审计部门在审计工作发现的问题进行了认真的梳理总结,对大家作了一些通报,希望全县各部门、各单位、各镇街以及学校、医院等单位,一定要认真贯彻好本次会议精神,回去以后要结合本单位工作实际,认真进行总结,认真进行整改。下面,我再讲四点意见:一、充分肯定读后续写的具体要求 给文： 350词以内，(多为记叙文) 有段落开头语(各一句) 要求： 接续原文（150词左右), 故事合理、完整，衔接度高2读后续写的高分攻略第五档：21分-25分第四档：16分-20分第三档：11分-15分第二档：6分-10分第一档：1分-5分评分标准续写扣分理由一、书写潦草，卷面涂改；二、上下文的连贯性差；三、错词错句多，好词好句少；四、没有丰富和生动的细节推动情节的发展；五、与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度差六、无逻辑性，故事主题跑偏。获得高分的写作技巧Tip 1: 故事要围绕着主要人物展开。Tip 2: 详细刻画角色及其情感。Tip 3: 使用恰当的衔接词以使故事更有连贯性。Tip 4: 使用恰当的修饰词以使描写更加生动。Tip 5: 做到首尾呼应以使故事更加有条理。Tip 6: 确保第二段和第一段的衔接有逻辑。示例 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。(2016年10月浙江高考试题) One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thi