(浙江专版)2017高考英语二轮复习专题3应用文写作类型5求助信讲练.docxVIP

类型 5| 求助信 1．求助信要简明扼要，语气委婉、真诚，不强人所难，并尽量提供足够的信息，能使 收信人愿意帮助你。 2．写作指导 (1) 清晰陈述请求的内容或所要获取的信息； (2) 提出的问题数量不宜过多，要便于回答； (3) 解释收信人回信的理由并表示感谢。 假如你是某中学的高一学生李明， 英语给某英文杂志 Helper 栏目的编辑 问题。 最近与母亲关系紧张， 难以相处。 请根据下表内容用 Mr.Smith 写一封 80 词左右的求助信，请他帮你解决 你的情况 你母亲的情况 你的问题 1. 学习成绩好； 1. 大学教授， 工作勤奋， 很少有时 1. 与母亲很少交流； 2. 爱母亲； 间和你说话； 2. 不知如何沟通。 3. 有点害怕母亲。 2. 对你严格要求，易发脾气。 [ 习作评阅 ] ——自我修改三档作文 Dear Mr.Smith ， I am writing to tell you my problem ①troubled me for a long time.It is ②relationship between my mother and me. My mother is a university professor works very hard.She is strict ③she ④in me but she is so busy with her work that she finds little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies ， but I still feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper ⑤easy.I dont know how to communicate with her. Maybe its because we have seldom sat down and ⑥exchange our feelings and thoughts. ⑦ ( 如果您能帮助我，我将不胜感激。 ) Best wishes. 1. 避免词汇搭配错误 ④处 in 改为 with 2. 杜绝语法错误 ①处 troubled 应改成 troubling ②处应添加冠词 the ③处应添加连词 and ⑤处 easy 改为 easily ⑥处 exchange 改为 exchanged 3. 要点一定不要遗漏 补上⑦处要点： Id appreciate it if you give me a way out. ③处改为倒装句： so busy isworking very hard②处改为现在分词短语：用 ③处改为倒装句： so busy is working very hard ②处改为现在分词短语： 用 the reason why...is to me which/that has troubled me ①处改为定语从句： she with her work that she that... 连接④、⑤句： The for a long time reason why I dont know how finds little time to talk to communicate with her is Yours sincerely ， Best wishes. Yours sincerely ， Li Ming [ 自我提升 ] ——向极优作文迈进 高级句型 Dear Mr.Smith ， I am writing to tell you my problem ① troubling me for a long time.It is the relationship between my mother and me. My mothe