如何捕捉和照应原文续写点学案 高考英语作文复习.docxVIP

PAGE PAGE 3 如何捕捉和照应原文续写点 一、捕捉和照应续写点 1. 品读原文首段 2. 提炼原文主题 记叙文六要素：时间、地点、人物、起因、经过、结果 何人何时何地做了何事，结果如何，为什么 写人：本文叙述了…（人），赞扬了…人的…品质；写事：本文叙述了…（事），说明了…道理 3. 关注特定情节 4. 留意细节描写：语言、动作、神态、外貌、心理、环境、情感变化 5. 关注高频词 反复出现、重点描写的特定物品 6. 留意原文结尾：1）起因经过--结果；2）矛盾点/困难点—合理策略解决；3）冲突点—高潮点+结局 4）高潮点—结局；5）人物内心冲突的矛盾点/情感点—反转对比 7. 解读续写所给首句 ： 第二段开头隐含第一段结尾信息 二、真题案例【2016.10真题】阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, Im going to find a better spot for us to camp. and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopt