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小学五年级英语上册作文 【篇一：小学五年级英语各单元作文 (上册 ) 】 1. my english teacher 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是 “我的英语老师 ”〃是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作 者开门见山〃直接点题〃首先介绍了英语老师的 XX 〃然后逐一介绍 了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以与师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时〃要注意使用自己最熟悉的词 [组] 〃以免写出一 些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清 晰、规范等。 2. my days of the week i ’m a student and i am in grade 5.i get up at six o ’clock every day. i have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o ’clock. i have classes from monday to saturday. i have an english class on friday and i have a pe class on tuesday. i don ’thave to go to school on school, and i like to go swimming on that day. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是 “我的一周 ”〃小作者没有说一些空话〃而是从自 己的亲身经历写起〃叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为〃并特别强调 了星期天的喜好〃写得自然、流畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称与谓语动词的变化〃要依据提示〃结 合自己的实际〃写自己身边熟悉的事情。 3. my favourite food . do you know what this is? guess! its colour is yellow. it ’s long and thin. it looks like a small boat and crescent. oh, it is a banana. do you know what that is? guess again! its colour is orange. it ’s round. it looks like a small ball and a small lantern. oh, it is an orange. i like then a lot. i like ice-creams. i like to chew gum. chocolates and candies are yummy. i like them very much. how about you? what ’s your favourite food? 【要领点评】 my favourite food 是一篇很成功的文章〃小作者并不是简单地列举 出自己最喜欢的每一种食物〃而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章 用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外〃文章中出现了一些生 词〃可见小作者是用心查字典了。 4. i can help do housework i am a girl. my name is li ling. i ’m in class three, grade five. i ’mhelpful at home. i can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. after meals, i can help my mother do the dishes. on sunday, i can wash the clothes. what about you? are you helpful, too? 【要领点评】 本篇作文的题目是 “我可以帮助做家务 ”〃作者主要叙述自己在家帮 助做的事情〃介绍自己的名字〃所在年级与在家能做的家务〃很详 细〃到位。 小朋友们在写