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学必求其心得，业必贵于专精 学必求其心得，业必贵于专精 学必求其心得，业必贵于专精 第三部分　要诀四 （2012全国新课标Ⅱ卷） 假定你是李华，你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括： 1．时间:周五晚8点至9点 2．地点：学生俱乐部 3．内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 4．要求：备小礼物 注意： 1．词数100左右; 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．结语已为你写好。 Dear Susan, ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua Hi Susan, Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday。 Wed like to invite you to the party. （1）We want to give him a surprise， ① but please keep quiet about it。 We’ll gather at the Students’ Club at 8：00 p．m。 ②the Friday, after the evening classes. And it will last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he ③come， we’ll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday together for him. （2）Then the cake will be cut and well sing songs and play games。 Itll be nice to see how excited he will be。 I’m sure you’ll have a good time at the party, too. Yours, Li Hua 1．错误聚焦 (1)① but前后两句话的意思没有转折关系，只是一种承接关系，故要将but改为 ____________。 （2)表达“在星期几时，“星期”不用加任何冠词或指示词，故②the要改为 ____________。 （3）在时间状语从句中,从句用一般现在时,主句用一般将来时，故③come要改为____________。 【答案】（1)and　(2）this　（3）comes 2．高分靓句 （1）将画线句子(1）改为含有非谓语动词的句子：Please keep quiet about it ____________________________________________. （2)将画线句子（2）改成主语是we,多个并列谓语动词的句子：We’ll cut the cake，__________________________________。 【答案】 (1)in order to/to give him surprise （2）sing songs and play games 参考范文 Hi Susan, We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday。 And I am writing to invite you to our party. Would you like to come and join us？ We will be very glad if you can come. The party will start at 8 o’clock on Friday， and will last for an hour。 We will meet in the Students’ Club。 Then we will have a birthday song, cake for Xiaoming。 We will play some games， too. The only requirement is preparing a small g