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More exercise： 2012年春，广东省部分中小学和幼儿园爆发流感。 2. （流感的爆发）主要与广东春季温暖，潮湿的 气候相关。 3. 发病学生的症状是发热，咳嗽，咽痛。 4. 部分学校为保护学生健康，停课3天。（suspend） 5. 专家建议（人们应该）避免到拥挤的公共场所， 勤洗手（并且）保证充足睡眠。 break out outbreak 定从 不定式 it作形式主语 倒装句 注意：时态 More exercise： 2012年春，广东省部分中小学和幼儿园爆发流感。 2. （流感的爆发）主要与广东春季温暖，潮湿的 气候相关。 3. 发病学生的症状是发热，咳嗽，咽痛。 4. 部分学校为保护学生健康，停课3天。（suspend） 5. 专家建议（人们应该）避免到拥挤的公共场所， 勤洗手（并且）保证充足睡眠。 break out outbreak 定从 不定式 it作形式主语 倒装句 注意：时态 How to avoid mistakes： Check 结构 有无句子主干 两个谓语间有无连词 谓语 时态 语态 主谓一致 搭配 How to improve： 同位语 主从复合句 非谓语 with 结构 特殊句型(倒装句、强调句、it作形式主语) An outbreak of Dengue Fever, which is believed to be the worst in Guangdong Province in the past 20 years, has made more than 30,000 people infected with it since June,2014. Many cities and regions of the province have found the cases due to the high temperature and wet weather, among which Guangzhou is the worst affected area in the outbreak. Spread by mosquitoes, Dengue Fever, a tropical disease, usually causes high fever combined with muscle and joint aches. To cope with the risk, the citizens are encouraged to take some effective measures such as keeping a clean environment and removing dirty water where mosquitoes produce their young. Besides, it’s particularly important to wear long sleeves and trousers to avoid being bitten by mosquitoes. How to avoid mistakes： Check 结构 有无句子主干 两个谓语间有无连词 谓语 时态 语态 主谓一致 搭配 How to improve： 同位语 主从复合句 非谓语 with 结构 特殊句型(倒装句、强调句、it作形式主语) 1.Because of the hot and damp weather, Dengue Fever has broken out in Guangdong Province since June, 2014 and it is the worst in the past 20 years. As a result of the high temperature and damp weather, Dengue Fever ，which is reported to be the severest in the past 20 years， has broken out in Guangdong Province since June, 2014. How to score higher? with 结构 定从 名词性从句 非谓语 倒装句 同位语 特殊句式 （it）… 基础写作 近期，广东省登革热呈现爆发态势。请根据以下信息写一篇英语报道，内容包括： 时间：自2014年6月以来 事件：广东省爆发近20年来最严重的登革热疫情 原因：高温和潮湿的天气