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浙江大学宁波理工学院 2014–2015 学年第一学期《翻译理论与实践（英译汉）》课程 期中考试卷（B）答案和评分标准 Part 1: Translate the following passage: (50%) 在这个信息时代的知识经济中，对个体来说最大的未知数是如何在无终身职业的体制中拥有职业。教 育对个体来说既是一种高回报投资，也是一种高风险投资。当新知识淘汰旧技术时，公司希望雇佣那些掌 握新知识的工人。20 世纪 90 年代的后五年，尽管经济繁荣，尽管公司赢利，美国每年都解雇50 多万名员 工。以往的职业阶梯已不复存在，以往的终身员工也不复存在。无论是明说还是暗示，传递给今日大学毕 业生的信息是：你在任何一家公司都不大可能被终身雇佣。你要学会如何对自己的职业负责，学会如何规 划好自己的职业。每年定期增加工资已成为过去。在一个迅速变化的世界里，年纪较大的员工带来的经验 和技能往往是陈旧过时的，社会上永远有更有前途的大量待聘青年。 评分标准 50-45 percent: EXCELLENT TRANSLATION The translation faithfully reflects all the original passage with only 1 or 2 minor errors in vocabulary, syntax, punctuation or spelling. The translation is elegant (appropriate choice of words, a variety in sentence patterns). 44-40 percent: GOOD TRANSLATION WITH FEW INACCURACIES The translation reflects almost all the original passage with relatively few significant errors of vocabulary, syntax, spelling or punctuation. The translation is readable (generally clear, smooth and cohesive). 39-35 percent: PASSABLE TRANSLATION WITH SOME INACCURACIES The translation adequately reflects most of the original passage with occasional errors of vocabulary, syntax, spelling or punctuation. The translation is, for the most part, readable. 25 percent or less: INADEQUATE TRANSLATION WITH FREQUENT INACCURACIES The translation only reflects about half of the original passage or less, with frequent errors of vocabulary, syntax, spelling or punctuation. The translation is, in some parts, unreadable. Part 2: Translate the underlined part in the following passage: (50%) 到黎明时分，那溪流、树林、山峰都已被积雪覆盖，闪着一片美丽的白光。 大雪过后，最美的是常绿树木。粗大的树枝缀满白雪，低垂于树干四周，看上去就像一只只合拢翅膀 抵御严寒的巨鸟。 小雪过后，最美的要数落叶树。它们是那么飘渺，如透明的烟雾飘在河岸，又是那么脆弱，似乎水声 也会把它们震碎。在这个令人陶醉的世界里，灌木丛犹如银丝织成的工艺品，闪着微光，轻盈而又易碎， 哪怕一阵最轻柔的风也会把雪花吹落，留下光秃秃的褐色枝条惹人怜惜。 评分标准 50-45 percent: EXCELLENT TRANSLATION The translation faithfully reflects all the original passage with only 1 or 2 minor errors in vocabulary, syntax, punctuation or spelling. The translation is elegant (appropriate choice of words, a variety in