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英语四级考试写作高分突破专项训练(13) 第二章各种题材练习与范文 在前面的几章中我们从理论和实践两个方面探讨了有关大学英 语四级写作的内容。在这一章中我们将为考生提供一些具体的范文， 帮助考生更好地理解前面所阐述的内容。考生可以对这些范文进行分 析，包括分析作者是怎样安排文章结构的，又是怎样呈现主题句、表 达自己的思想的。当然，也别忘了在这些文章中找出它们的闪亮点来， 分析一下作者是怎样抓住读者的。同时，也应该注意看看范文是如何 造句的，学习用正确、地道、准确的语言来表达自己的思想。 一、环境、健康 \[范文 1\] Lucky NumberMy friend Mary was born on June 13th, 1977. She is always dissatisfied with her birthday because “13” is an “evil” number. There are lots of people who are convinced that good numbers bring good luck and bad numbers bring disasters. Hence, 13, 4 and other so?called evil numbers are wiped off from cards, list, menus, etc. Even in some cities, there is no bus No.13 or No.13 Street.I don’t think numbers have anything to do with luck. Numbers were created for counting. There is no relationship between a certain number and one’s fate. There are many people who succeed in spite of “close 第 1 页 共 9 页 relationship” with bad numbers. There are also a lot of people, who should have been blessed by “lucky” numbers, involved in accidents. Take my friend Mary for example. She achieved a good study at the nation’s most prestigious university and later gained good reputation in her career. Her luck is not a bit damaged by her “bad birthday”.In a word, numbers are numbers. They stand for nothing but quantity. Numbers have nothing to do with luck. \[范文 2\] On Making FriendsAs a human being, one can hardly do without a friend. If we don’t have a friend in the world, our life will not be interesting and we cannot live more happily.But what is true friendship? True friendship can share happiness and sadness with you. A bad friend, on the other hand, only loves you when you are lucky and rich. When you become poor and powerless they will desert you. We all know, “A friend in need is a friend indeed”. So, we need to take the persons who are dedicated to the contribution of our relationship as our real f