2021年5月15日小作文范文及解析.pdf

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask. The graph below shows the average time spent byfour car manufacturers to produce vehiclesattheirUSfactoriesfrom1998to2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisonswhererelevant. Writeatleast150words. 注：图形根据考场回忆绘制，具体数据或有出入。 【图形分类】 曲线图 【题目解析】 图形给出了4个美国汽车厂商平均车辆生产的用时变 。 【写作思路】 开头段：转述题目 主体段一：GM的生产效率逐年稳步提高，平均生产车辆的时间从1998年的32hr 辆下降到2005年的22hr 辆。 主体段二：Ford虽然前三年生产时间变长，但在2001年之后效率提高。到2005 年，平均生产时间下降到21小时。 主体段三：Toyota和Honda工厂的生产时间一直较短，尽管期间有较大的波动， 两个公司的美国工厂也少量的减少了平均生产时间。 总结：虽然两个日本车企的总体生产效率要高一些，但两个美国车企在这期间缩 小了差距。 【参考范文】： Thelinegraphcomparesthechangesintheaveragehoursneededtomanufacturea vehicle by four companies – General Motor, Ford, Toyota and Honda – at their producingsitesintheUSbetween1998and2005. It is clearthat GM had successfully improved their productivity, with the average time reducing from 32 hours per vehicle to 22 hours during the given period, although the figure remained the highest among the four producers. In Ford’s factories, therewas an initialincrease inthefigurefrom28 hourstoover30 until 2001, after which the factories started to achieve higher efficiency. By 2005, the timeneededtoproduceacarhaddescendedtojust21hours. Interms of Toyota and Honda, both manufacturers kept their average production timeatalowlevelbetween20and24hourspercar,maintaininghigherproductivity than the other two competitors. Despite wild fluctuations throughout the whole period,factoriesof bothToyotaand Hondamanagedtoslightly reducetheaverage time. Overall, while the two Japanese car companies produced vehicles more quickly in general,thetwoUSmanufacturershadnarrowedthegapremarkably. （189words） 【语言积累】 1. successfullyimprovedtheirproductivity 成功的提高了生产力 2. remainedthehighest 保持最高 3. aninitialincrease 一开始的增长 4. achievehigherefficiency 实现更高效率 5. afterwhich… 在那之后 6. descendv. 下降 7. averageproductiontime 平均生产时间 8. narrowthegap 缩小差距 WRITINGT