2023届高三英语写作专项读后续写（以高考真题为例）课件.pptxVIP

读后续写怎么写?--高考总复习作文专题目录1.如何续写2.原题演练3.例句赏析4.参考范文1.如何续写step1.审原文who（谁），when （什么时候），where（发生在哪里）why（为什么），what （发生了什么）原文5要素备注：也有6要素的说法，how(主人公是怎么样去做某件事，做的怎么样)step1.审原文原文5要素No.1who谁（续写不加新人）step1.审原文原文5要素 NO.2when什么时候（以一般过去时为主）step1.审原文原文5要素 NO.3where在哪里（故事背景不能天马行空篡改）step1.审原文原文5要素 NO.4why为什么（主人公面临的问题结尾应该解决）step1.审原文原文5要素 NO.5what 做什么（要合理发展，有效对话，推动情节发展）step2.写句子第一段第二句第一段最后一句第二段第二句第二段最后一句关键4句step3.标线索A. 动作线B.情感线C.时间线标记3线索step3.标线索标记3线索A. 动作线（续写最后一定大团圆闭环结尾，想清楚文章想表达什么道理或者正能量？）step3.标线索标记3线索B.情感线（续写最后结尾一定是积极向上的感情）step3.标线索标记3线索C.时间线（建议按照时间顺序续写）2.原题演练高考原题读后续写题目再现阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean