雅思动态饼状图范文优选31篇.docxVIP

　　Introduction 　　The bar chart compares the time spent by 10 to 15-year-olds in the UK on two activities, namely chatting online and playing computer games. 　　该柱状图比较了英国10至15岁青少年的两项活动，即在线聊天和玩电脑游戏。 　　Overview 　　By contrast, girls prefer chatting online. Close to 70% of 10 to 15-year-old girls engage in online conversation each day, compared to about 50% of this cohort who play computer games. Of the girls who do play on consoles, most of them play for less than an hour, whereas most girls who chat online do so for more than one hour, and nearly 10% chat for four hours or more.(188) 　　饼图：游客分析 　　The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. 　　Task achievement 　　1. 数据选取方面，文章描述了图中给出的所有阶段。虽然在第一幅图片具体的时间上有所取舍，但基本不影响理解。 　　2. 文章的最后一段对两张图表进行了总结，并指出它们之间的关系（第一幅图中的蚕茧是第二幅图的原材料）。这点大家要尤其注意一下。如果考试中文章来自老烤鸭雅思遇到的流程图是两幅图，总结的时候还需要点出它们之间的关系，而非简单分别描述即可。 　　3. 因为是流程图，所以该篇文章中并没有进行数据的对比。这点也不是流程图考察的重点。 　　Coherence and Cohesion 　　1. 文章逻辑结构合理。第一自然段描述蚕的成长过程，第二自然段描述丝绸的制造过程，第三自然段总结概括。每个自然段内部又按照图表中的顺序进行描述。不过说实话，流程图中只要大家不要自己随意发挥，按照图表顺序来，逻辑结构上就没有什么大问题。 　　2. 文章的连接主要依靠各种各样表示顺序的词汇，而这也是流程图考察的重点。具体内容请参考下面的“高分词汇短语总结”板块。 　　Lexical Resource 　　文章用词丰富。除了图标中给出的词汇之外，还使用了诸如feed on, last, emerge等十分生动形象单词。 　　Grammatical Range 　　语法结构方面，文章只有三个从句，剩下的全部都是简单句。但相邻两句的结构并没有相同的地方。还是我们之前说过的，雅思写作语法方面评分的关键不在于句子的复杂程度，而在于多样性。 　　Most senior citizens retire or no longer work full-time. They usually live in their own houses not far from their childrens, while the children of a few senior citizens have gone abroad and work or study far beyond the oceans. For certain senior citizens, tile years after retirement are not very enjoyable. First, they feel that their lives lose meaning for being at home all day. In addition, they may feel lonely, especially those without children around. Moreover, they become more concerned with their health, as they grow older, and worry a lot about their safety. At the same time, many senior citizens enjoy their lives. They