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先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐。——范仲淹 2023 年5 月13 日雅思大作文示范写作 一、题目：不正当的名人是否给青年树立良好榜样 Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 二、范文及解析 Introduction Idolizing stars in either entertainments or sports industry is common among youngsters today, while this faddism has been frowned upon by skeptics who argue that these household names are simply well known for their charm and money instead of concrete accomplishment. 解析：如今，名人更出名的是他们的魅力和财富，而不是他们的 成就，这给年轻人树立了一个不好榜样。你在多大程度上同意或不同 意这种说法? 名人影响话题经典题目，最近一次出现在2020 年12 月。 注意先探讨题目中的前提 more famous for glamour and wealth than accomplishments 是否合理,再勘查他们是否对年轻人构成负面影响。 Idolizing stars 追星 Faddism n.赶时髦 Be frowned upon 被不赞成 Skeptics n. 怀疑论者 Body 1 Granted, there is a proliferation of fame due to pervasive use of virtual social media. Aiming for huge social media following, some movie stars or pop stars capitalize on selfies of one’s sensational figure in a tiny 1 丹青不知老将至，贫贱于我如浮云。——杜甫 忍一句，息一怒，饶一着，退一步。——《增广贤文》 dress or posing for a lavish lifestyle. This gimmick is also used by millionaire influencer who target to be Internet sensation. Therefore, it is absurd to overlook its repercussions over teenagers who are daily users of YouTube and Twitter, with the worst-case scenario being falling prey to eating disorder or consumerism. 解析：分析凭借魅力和财富出名的情况。虚拟社交媒体让电影明 星和流行明星轻松出名，其中不乏博主。其中炫耀的露骨身材以及豪 华生活方式对年轻人造成很大危害。 Proliferation n.激增