读后续写A letter to father公开课.pptxVIP

读后续写 A letter to father01文本分析 the understanding of the passage02抓伏笔自我提问建构情节目录03优秀习作和下水作文欣赏CONTENTS04类似话题续写语篇联系05小情节语料积累1文本分析 主题语境：人与社会；话题：父子关系重建Part原文呈现 It’s hard to talk to dads sometimes. The roles we often expect our fathers to play-protector，provider-can make the m seem impenetrable(不可理解的). That’s how it was with my dad. He came to Canada at the age of ten and settled in an immigrant community. He was never much of a talker. He rarely drank, so we didnt get to see him loosen up after a few beers. He didnt tell stories about himself at the dinner table or when we went for walks in the park. He was a private person and seemed to want to stay that way. Bringing up the many questions I had about life before I was born-his early hopes and dreams, loves and heartbreaks--let alone sharing my own feelings, felt like too much for us to handle. I didnt want to threaten the integrity （完整）of his hard shell. I had gotten used to it, and it made me feel secure. But when my relationship and career took a hit a year ago at the same time, things had to change. I was facing serious questions about my own nature, and I wanted to know that he had faced them too. I needed to know how he had found his way, because I felt like I had lost mine. In a severe moment of desperation, it occurred to me that sending an email might be the key. An email can be crafted （精心制作）slowly and carefully. I could speak at a comfortable distance and give him room to adjust. Hed be up in his office-a comfortable place filled with bookshelves, dusty CD-ROMs and piles of old newspapers. Id be at my desk in an apartment 20 minutes away.So I wrote to him. I told him about my regrets and fears, and I asked him to answer, if he felt like it, and to share something about himself, something that would give me much-needed perspective on my life, especially on relationship and career.Para1: Two weeks later, his response showed up in my email box.Para2: I closed the email and started to cry. Climaxpara 1 Two weeks