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（一）（2021年宝山一模） Write at least 60 words about the topic “ An act of kindness”.(以“一个善意的举动”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） “ 赠人玫瑰，手有余香”。 意思是一件很平凡微小的事情，哪怕如同赠人一只玫瑰般微不足道， 但它带来的温馨都会在赠花人和爱花人的心底慢慢升腾、弥漫。因此，善待他人也是善待自己，请结合生活中的一次真实经历，谈一谈你对善良的看法。（注意：1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2. 照搬阅读语篇内容不得分。） The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考） have trouble with/doing give a help hand.... treat sb with kindness... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An act of kindness Here is a touching moment in my life that l will never forget. l still remember that was a rainy day. l failed an exam, and l felt very upset. What’s worse, I didn’t bring an umbrella. Countless raindrops beat against my body. Suddenly, the raindrops disappeared. When l looked up, l saw a big umbrella and my deskmate, Mike. He said , “An exam can’t stand for everything. l believe you can get good grades next time.” His words really touched my heart and cheered me up . After that, l studied harder and made great progress. It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should treat others with kindness, when have trouble with something. 【解析】 【分析】 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时结合题目要求，进行作答写作，第一段引出话题“善意的举动”；第二段记叙一次善意的举动；第三段说明自己对善意的看法。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；记叙善意的举动这件事情，时态采用一般过去时为主，说明自己对于善良的看法，采用一般现在时为主。需要叙述