公开课爸爸最美的花.ppt

Be clear about the maring criteria 第五档21-25 与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落、开头语衔接合理； 内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语； 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达； 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 Remember Closely related between paragraphs and within paragraphs Specific words or vivid description Various sentence patterns Underlined words Tiaring criteria in mind while writing Feelings: angry---annoyed; furious; mad;irritated happy--- joyful; delighted; pleased ;cheerful afraid---frightened; scared; frightful Polish---to use low frequency words  替换低频词 Actions: wal---steultiply;snowball aniety/fright Polish---to use low fre