高中英语读后续写中的细节描写公开课PPT课件.pptx

读后续写中的细节描写Detailed Description in Continuation Writing 要求说明字数续写内容为150词左右材料350词以内要求1.原文提供10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语，所续写内容应使用5处以上这些词语。2.两段，每段的开头语已经给出体裁记叙文故事类逻辑性较强 写作要求融洽度高衔接合理5个以上关键词语法词汇丰富准确结构紧凑150字左右 情节与语言 plotlanguage情节决定语言的选择语言实现情节的目的 细节描写的分类环境描写 Description of Natural Environment动作描写 Description of Action心理描写 Description of Psychology vocabularyverbsAdjectivesAdverbs The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and dashed for the back door of the car. It was locked. He then ran around to the passenger door, but it was locked, as well, so he began to climb through the open window. When spotting this, Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man dived in, slamming the door behind him. Paul looked out the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac’s bike as if it were a kill. Shortly after, the animal ran off.Description of Action We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The bright blue sky, the limitless green grass, the group of sheep, the setting sun and the countless stars in the curtain of nights kept me spellbound. Not only did we see the picturesque scenery, we also managed to consider mom’s scandals as a kind of fun. I really love my Mum. To our relief, we arrived at grandparents’ place and went back to our home with all of four people. It was so fortunate to see my friends again.Description of Natural Environment We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We had to get off the horses and tried to figure out the way back, but after many attempts, we still failed---we got lost. I grew a bit anxious, but with dad around, I felt all right. As darkness thickened, dad believed it was safer to stay on the spot and waited for help. It was then that we enjoyed a symphony of nature---the warm breeze ruffling through the trees, the insects buzzing and other animals contributing their unique sounds…This serenity ended as we heard shouts and torches came into our sight. At this time, I felt extremely