2023届高考英语二轮复习写作中的高级表达妙记8言简意明的非谓语动词和withwithout复合结构学案.docVIP

PAGE / NUMPAGES 妙记8 言简意明的非谓语动词和with/without复合结构 众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关系显得松散；而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。而恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅显得句式多样，句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明。 一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句 写作时，我们可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行转换，使其成为较高级的表达方式。 ①I want to improve myself by reading some books.The books were written in the Tang Dynasty. →I want to improve myself by reading some books written in the Tang Dynasty. 我想通过读一些书来提高自己，这些书是在唐朝时期写的。 ②Mount Tai stands in Shandong Province.It has long been a popular tourist attraction, with many Chinese legendary stories attached to it. →Standing in Shandong Province, Mount Tai has long been a popular tourist attraction, with many Chinese legendary stories attached to it.(2023·北京高考书面表达) 泰山位于山东省。它一直是一个受欢迎的旅游景点，有许多中国传奇故事。 [即时演练]　用非谓语动词进行句型转换 1．All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom. →All_the_people_here_like_the_novel_written_by_Tom. (用过去分词作定语) 2．The boy came to school late again. This made the teacher very angry. →The_boys_coming_to_school_late_again_made_the_teacher_very_angry.(用动名词作主语) 3．The students were making the most of time. They wanted to finish the homework earlier. →The_students_were_making_the_most_of_time_so_as_to_finish_the_homework_earlier.(用动词不定式作目的状语) 二、运用非谓语动词转换复合句 用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些，因为需转换的一般是从句部分，这时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词，再把握好时态和语态即可。 ①I have been taking exercise and reading books as well as online materials about Tianjin so that I will be both physically and mentally qualified for this job. →In order to be both physically and mentally qualified for this job, I have been taking exercise and reading books as well as online materials about Tianjin.(2023·天津高考书面表达) 我一直在锻炼，阅读书籍和有关天津的网上资料，这样我在身体上和精神上都能胜任这项工作。 ②Because I thought that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. →Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.(202X·湖北高考短文写作) 因为我认为他的解决办法可能是错误的，我仔细分析了这个问题，并试图用另一种方法