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假定你是xx，在美国某博物馆参观时，购买了一本介绍该馆所收藏文物的书籍，阅读后发现书中对一些中国文物(artifacts)的英文介绍有误。请你就此向博物馆写一封信，内容包括：1.投诉问题；2.提出建议。

DearSirorMadam,

IamLiHua,aChinesewhopaidavisittoyourmuseumtheotherday.Iamwritingtoexpressmycomplaintaboutthemistakesinxxxxbookintroducingtheculturalrelicsinxxxxmuseum.

ItcomesasashockthatsomeobviouserrorsintheintroductionofChineseartifactsarefoundinthebook.xxxsymbolicsignificancediffersbetweenChineseandwesterndragonsbutthereexistsmisinterpretationinaChinesepainting.Worsestill,theauthorsanddatesmarkedonsomeartifactsareatoddswiththefacts,whichwilldefinitelyxxxxxxxreputationofyourmuseum.Itispreferabletoorganizeexpertstoreviewthisbookandremovexxxbookswithincorrectintroduction.

Ihopeyoucantakemyappealintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourfavorablereply.

解析：

1.应用文写作前三步骤：

（1）审题判定本文为投诉信；

（2）因对方是博物馆工作人员，双方不熟悉，故李华身份要交代；

（3）因文本主体部分为投诉内容，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。

2.本文的亮点：

（1）Itcomesasashockthat令人非常震惊，that引导主语从句，it为形式主语；

（2）differbetween两者间存在不同；

（3）worsestill更糟的是；

（4）beatoddswith与...不相符；

（5）definitely确定地；

（6）Itispreferabletodosth做某事是更可取的；

（7）take...intoconsideration把...考虑在内；

（8）favorablereply肯定答复。

ChatGPT版本

DearMuseumDirector,

IamxxHua,arecentvisitortoyourmuseum.Duringmyvisit,Ipurchasedabookdescribingtheartifactsinyourcollection.However,uponreadingthebook,InoticedseveralinaccuraciesintheEnglishdescriptionsoftheChineseartifacts.

Firstly,Imustexpressmyconcernthattheseinaccuraciescouldleadtomisunderstandingsaboutourculturalheritage.Itiscrucialthatthedescriptionsofthesepricelessobjectsarepreciseandaccurate,especiallyforvisitorswhomaynotbefamiliarwithChinesecultureandhistory.

Toaddressthisissue,IsuggestthatyourmuseumteamreviewandupdatetheEnglishdescriptionsoftheChineseartifacts.Thisshouldbedoneinconsultationwithexpertswhohaveadee