英汉互译二-荷塘月色.ppt

曲曲折折的荷塘上面，弥望的是田田的叶子。叶子出水很高，像亭亭的舞女的裙。?朱纯深’s Alloverthiswindingstretchofwater,whatmeetstheeyeisasilkenfieldofleaves,reachingratherhighabovethesurface,liketheskirtsofdancinggirlsinalltheirgrace.这个meet用得很好，也是非人称主语句的用法。?D.波拉德’sOnthesurfaceoftheserpentinelotuspondallonecouldseewasfieldsofleaves.Theleavesstoodhighabovethewater,splayedoutliketheskirtsofatallslimballerina.其他人都用的是dancinggirls，只有这个版本译成了ballerina，我觉得这样翻译挺好的，因为比较具体，一看就能联想到芭蕾舞演员的样子。?杨宪益、戴乃迭译Asfaraseyecouldsee,thepoolwithitswindingmarginwascoveredwithtrimleaves,whichrosehighoutofthewaterliketheflaredskirtsofdancinggirls.这个flaredskirts是喇叭裙的意思，与荷叶很像，这种译法很形象。李明译本Alloverthepondwithitswindingmarginwhatmeettheeyewasafieldtrimleaves.Theleavesrisehighoutofthewater,lookingliketheflaredskirtsoffairlassesdancinggracefully.lass小姑娘（之前不知道这种用法）?王椒升译文Ontheunevensurfaceofthepond,allonecouldseewasamassofleaves,allinterlacedandshootinghighabovethewaterliketheskirtsofslimdancinggirls.这个uneven我觉得用得不是特别好，这表示不平，粗糙的意思，在这里没有表现出荷塘的曲折。Shooting我不太明白在这里是什么意思。第一步：分句层

层层的叶子中间，零星地点缀着些白花，/有袅娜地开着的，有羞涩地打着朵儿的；正如一粒粒的明珠，又如碧天里的星星，/又如刚出浴的美人。

第二步：分句分析?1层层的叶子中间，零星地点缀着些白花层层的layersof;tiersof;点缀着bedottedwith(星星点点散布着)；starring(用星形物装饰；点缀)Hereandthere,layersofleavesaredottedwithwhitelotusblossoms,Hereandthereamongthelayersofleavesweresownshiningwhiteflowers,Andstarringthesetiersofleaveswerewhitelotusflowers,Uponlayersofleavesaredottedwithwhitelotusflowers,Theleavesweredottedinbetweenthelayerswithwhiteflowers,赏析比较：除了杨戴版，其他版本大同小异。个人觉得介词有画龙点睛的作用。2有袅娜地开着的，有羞涩地打着朵儿的；袅娜的（草木柔弱细长的样子）demure;glamorous;alluring;graceful;羞涩的shy;bashful;开着的inbloom;bloom(v.);open;打着朵的inbud;bud(v.)someindemurebloom,othersinshybud,（介词形式）somebloomingglamorously,someinshybud,alluringlyopenorbashfullyinbud,s