二零二三年 优质公开课ContinuationWriting高复会.pptx

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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Withallherbigbrothersandsistersofftoschool,ourfarmbecamealonelyplaceforourthree-year-olddaughter,Becky.Shelongedforplaymates.Wepromisedtobuyherapuppybutinthemeantime,“pretend”puppiespoppedupnearlyeveryday.IhadjustfinishedwashingthelunchdisheswhenthedoorslammedandBeckyrushedin,cheeksflushedwithexcitement.“Mama!”shecried,“Comeseemynewdoggy!Igavehimwatertwotimesalready.He’ssothirsty!”Isighed,anotherofBecky’sdogs.“Pleasecome,Mama.”Shepulledmyjeans,herbrowneyesbegging,“He’scrying—andhecan’twalk!”“Can’twalk?”Anunexpectedchange!Allherpreviousimaginarydogscoulddoamazingthingssuchasbalancingaballontheendofitsnoseanddancingonatightrope.Whysuddenlyadogthatcouldn’twalk?“Allright,honey,”Isaid.BythetimeItriedtofollowher,Beckyhadalreadydisappearedintothebushes.“Whereareyou?”Icalled.“Overherebytheoakstump(橡树桩).Hurry,Mama!”

Ipartedthebranchesandraisedmyhandagainsttheglareofthesun.Anumbingchill(寒战)grippedme.Thereshewas,sittingonherheels;cradled(抱着)inherlapwastheunmistakableheadofawolf!“Becky,”Mymouthfeltdry.“Don’tmove.”Isteppedcloser.Pale-yelloweyesnarrowed.Blacklipstightened.Doublesetsoftwo-inchsharpteethwereexposed.Suddenlythewolftrembled.Itsteethclacked,andapainfulcryrosefromitsthroat.“It’sallright,boy,”Beckycomfortedlovingly.“Don’tbeafraid.That’smymama,andshelovesyou,too.”注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Takingacloserlook,Ifoundthewolfstuckdeepinsidethestump.____________________Paragraph2:WithBeckysafeinmyarms,Irantothevetforhelp.______________________________

Whattoreadfor?01.5W1H02.Feelings03.Theme(ifany)

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