满分写作周周赢 PPTWednesday　考场作文研析 (11).pptx

满分写作周周赢应用文写作/读后续写·高中英语

赢在微点高中英语满分写作周周赢Week5告知/回复信友情感悟类读后续写

Wednesday考场作文研析Week5配套使用《满分微练》第一部分10分钟随堂微练5

读后续写满分技巧5从4个维度无缝衔接①首句的衔接:续写第一段和第二段开头句紧跟首句,与首句关键信息自然衔接;②第一段与第二段的衔接:续写第一段内容和第二段内容自然承接,尤其注意第一段尾句和第二段首句的自然衔接;③与原文的逻辑衔接:续写内容与原文隐含信息或伏笔合理衔接;④续写内容间的衔接:续写内容上一句与下一句之间的自然衔接,在表达时,常利用副词(短语)、形容词(短语)或非谓语动词等多种表达手段,以使衔接自然。

好题探索阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2022·浙江首考改编)WhenDr.Hendersonwasassigning(指定)projectmatesforhispsychologyclass,IsecretlyhopedthathewouldpairmewithmybestfriendoratleastaclassmateIcouldhavesomefunwith.①Aboveall,Ihopedhewouldn’tassignmetoworkwiththefiercelycompetitiveandextremelyseriousfellowwhoalwaysworedarkclothesandapparentlyhadapersonalitytomatch.②Asfate(命运)wouldhaveit,Dr.HendersonverydeliberatelymatchedeveryoneinclassandannouncedthatIwouldbeworkingwiththeonepersoninclassIwantedtoavoid.③Iwentuptomynewteammateandintroducedmyself.HelookedatmeasthoughIweren’tthere.④IfelthetreatedmeasthoughIwouldholdhimbackandprobablymakehimfailtogetanAinthecourse.(为害怕拖搭档后腿,表现消极埋下伏笔)Hewasn’tmeanorabusive;hejustgavemetheimpressionthathecoulddowhateverprojectwedreamedupbetterifhediditalone.

Needlesstosay,Ididn’tlookforwardtoanentiretermofbeingbrushedoff,butItriedtomakethebestofitanddidn’tsayanythingforfearthatIwouldmakethingsworse.Theprojectrequiredeachteamtodevelopahypothesis(假说),setupanexperimenttotestthehypothesis,dothestatisticalanalysisandpresentthefindings.(伏笔)Whatevergradetheteamreceivedwouldbesharedbybothstudents.(伏笔;可衔接处)WhenmyteammateandImettodiscussourproject,Iwasuneasy.Herewasthischallengingstudentwhohadareputationforsingle?mindednessandgoodgrades—theexactoppositeofme.Iactuallywantedtodroptheclassatonepoint,butstoppedshortbecauseIdidn’twanttogivehimthesatisfaction