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满分写作周周赢应用文写作/读后续写·高中英语赢在微点高中英语满分写作周周赢Week1建议信改变成长类读后续写Wednesday考场作文研析Week1配套使用《满分微练》第一部分10分钟../../满分写作周周赢%20满分微练%20%20PPT/第一部分%20随堂微练1.pptx随堂微练../../满分写作周周赢%20满分微练%20%20PPT/第一部分%20随堂微练1.pptx1读后续写满分技巧1定主旨明意图续写不走偏读后续写不是无视原文的独立创作,而应顺着原文作者的思路完成未完成的文本。续写前,应先认真阅读原文,理清原文的人物、故事情节发展线和情感发展线,把握其文本大意和叙事意图:①记叙文类的文本大意,即主要人或物描述的主要事件和结果;而叙事意图指故事主要内容传递给读者的信息,可以是情,也可以是理;②准确理解原文,根据“谁、发生了什么”,快速理清原文对主要人或物的描写并整理相关事件,提炼原文大意和叙事意图;③续写部分要在文本大意、叙事意图和主题上与原文保持一致。如2023年新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写部分的主题应与原文主题“坚持、改变、成长”一致。好题探索阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest,Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.⑥Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.⑦So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny,andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?③Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.Icheckedoutahalf?dozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.①WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedout