Cet6 composition分析和总结分析和总结.docx

Part

Part

Ⅴ

Writing

(30minutes)

Directions: Forthispart,youareallowedtowriteacompositiononthetopicOnPart-timeJobs.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline.

Somepeoplesaythatcollegestudentsshouldtakepart-timejobs.

Othersworrythatpart-timejobsdothemmoreharmthangood.

Whatisyourviewonthis? Whyorwhynot?

写作指导

本文为议论文。可以分四段写。在第一段中提出自己的观点。第二段列举大学生从事业余工作的好处，并举出论据；第三段举出论据，论证业余工作的弊端；最后提出自

己的建议。论证方法可采用比较和对比法，

业余工作的利与弊的比较对比；还可以用例证法；因果分析论证法。关联词可以用first,second(表示列举)；besides(表示补充：而且)；however(表示对比：可是，然而)等。

SampleWriting

OnPart-timeJobs

Peoplehavedifferentviewsonwhethercollegestudentsshouldtakepart-timejobs.Ithinkpart-timejobshaveboththeiradvantagesanddisadvantages.

First,part-timejobsmayofferstudentsanopportunitytodisplaytheirabilityandhelpthemapplytheirknowledgeinpractice,andinreturn,theirexperiencewillmakethemknowbetterwhattheyhavelearnedinclassandbooks.Second,part-timejobsin

businesscanfosterasenseof

competition,whichtheyneedinfuture.Part-timejobsmakestudentsmoreconfidentinthemselvesbecausethroughtheworktheycanrealizetheirownvalueandprovethattheyarecapablepeople.Third,ithelpsstudentsdevelopasenseofindependence,andhelpsrelievetheirparents’economicburdens.Withthemoneyearned,theycanbuywhatevertheyneedfortheirstudy.

However,part-timejobsoftendistractstudents’attentionfromtheirstudies,andsomestudentsevenplaytruant.Itisevidentthattheycanhardlyfocustheirattentionontheirstudyiftheyworkseveralhoursonthejob,fortheymaybepreoccupiedwithhowtoimprovetheirworkmostofthetime.Thoughstudentswhohavepart

-timejobsmayrelievetheirparents’

economicburdens,theirearlycontactwithsocietymayexposethemtosomesocialills.

Owingtotheadvantagesanddisadvantagesinvolvedinworkingpart-time,studentshavetostrikeaba