老高考适用2023版高考英语二轮总复习第3部分写作技能升华篇专题1短文改错第2讲句法类错误.docx

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第三部分专题一第2讲句法类错误

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(2022·广西南宁市高中毕业班第一次适应性测试)

Lastweek,Iwenttotravelorboughtaglassvase.Itwasoriginallypackedinabox,andthegapsintheboxwasfilledwithwastepaper.Consideringtheinconvenienceoftakingsomanyluggage,Ithrewawaytheboxandthepaper,anddirectlyputthevaseintosmallsuitcase.WhenIgotonthebus,becauseofItripped,thesuitcasehitthechairheavy.Iopeneditandsawthevasehavebeenbroken.Atthattime,Iregrettedthrowawaytheseeminglyuselesswastepaper.Thereisnothingreallyuselessintheworld,eventhosepieceofwastepaper.Unlesstheyareusedintherightplace,theycanalsobeofgreatuse.

【答案】

Lastweek,Iwenttotraveleq\o(or,\s\do10(and))boughtaglassvase.Itwasoriginallypackedinabox,andthegapsintheboxeq\o(was,\s\do10(were))filledwithwastepaper.Consideringtheinconvenienceoftakingsoeq\o(many,\s\do10(much))luggage,Ithrewawaytheboxandthepaper,anddirectlyputthevaseintoeq\o(∧,\s\do10(a))smallsuitcase.WhenIgotonthebus,becauseofItripped,thesuitcasehitthechaireq\o(heavy,\s\do10(heavily)).Iopeneditandsawthevaseeq\o(have,\s\do10(had))beenbroken.Atthattime,Iregrettedeq\o(throw,\s\do10(throwing))awaytheseeminglyuselesswastepaper.Thereisnothingreallyuselessintheworld,eventhoseeq\o(piece,\s\do10(pieces))ofwastepaper.eq\o(Unless,\s\do10(When/If))theyareusedintherightplace,theycanalsobeofgreatuse.

【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者旅行时买了一个玻璃花瓶，因为把装花瓶的盒子和盒子里的废纸扔掉了，因意外花瓶碎裂，作者明白了世界上没有真正无用的东西。

1．考查连词。句意：上周，我去旅行，买了一个玻璃花瓶。wenttotravel与boughtaglassvase是并列关系，用并列连词and。故将or改为and。

2．考查主谓一致。句意：它最初是装在一个盒子里的，盒子里的空隙填满了废纸。主语为thegaps，是复数形式，系动词用were。故将was改为were。

3．考查代词。句意：考虑到带这么多行李的不便，我扔掉了盒子和纸，直接把花瓶放进了一个小行李箱。luggage是不可数名词，用much修饰，many修饰复数可数名词。故将many改为much。

4．考查冠词。句意同上题。suitcase是可数名词，此处泛指“一个小行李箱”，因此small前要加不定冠词，small是以辅音音素开头的，用不定冠词a。故在small前加a。

5．考查原因状语从句。句意：我上公共汽车时，因为绊倒了，手提箱重重地撞在椅子上。because后面接原因状语从句，b