老高考适用2023版高考英语二轮总复习第3部分写作技能升华篇专题1短文改错第1讲词法类错误.docx

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第三部分专题一第1讲词法类错误

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(2022·山西省晋城市高三第二次模拟)

MygrandmotherwerebornonafarminNewYork.At20,shelefthomeandworkedasahousekeeperinapainter?shouseuntilshemarriedwithmygrandfatherat27.Acouplefarmedformostoftheirlives,firstinVirginiaandtheninNewYork.Inmygrandmother?slateseventy,shemadeadecisionlearntopaint.Shesaidshejustwantedtokeepbusily,thoughshehadhadthatdreamsinceshefirstsawhisformeremployerpaint.Afewyearslate,herhardworkfinallypaidoff.Herpictureswerefirstsellingatalocalmarketandweresoonnoticedbyabusinessman,whichboughteverythingshepainted.

【答案】

Mygrandmothereq\o(were,\s\do10(was))bornonafarminNewYork.At20,shelefthomeandworkedasahousekeeperinapainter?shouseuntilshemarriedwithmygrandfatherat27.eq\o(A,\s\do10(The))couplefarmedformostoftheirlives,firstinVirginiaandtheninNewYork.Inmygrandmother?slateeq\o(seventy,\s\do10(seventies))，shemadeadecisioneq\o(∧,\s\do10(to))learntopaint.Shesaidshejustwantedtokeepeq\o(busily,\s\do10(busy))，thoughshehadhadthatdreamsinceshefirstsaweq\o(his,\s\do10(her))formeremployerpaint.Afewyearseq\o(late,\s\do10(later))，herhardworkfinallypaidoff.Herpictureswerefirsteq\o(selling,\s\do10(sold))atalocalmarketandweresoonnoticedbyabusinessman,eq\o(which,\s\do10(who))boughteverythingshepainted.

【解析】这是一篇记叙文，文章讲述了作者祖母的生平，她在晚年时开始学画画，后来实现了当画家的梦想。

1．考查主谓一致。句意：我的祖母出生在纽约的一个农场。主语Mygrandmother表示单数意义，be动词应用was。故将were改为was。

2．考查动词用法。句意：20岁时，她离开了家，在一个油漆工家里做管家，直到27岁嫁给了我的祖父。marry是及物动词，marrysb.意为“和某人结婚”，with多余。故删除with。

3．考查冠词。句意：这对夫妇一生中大部分时间都在务农，先是在弗吉尼亚州，然后是在纽约。此处是特指“祖父和祖母”这对夫妇，应用定冠词the。故将A改为The。

4．考查数词。句意：在我祖母70多岁的时候，她决定学习绘画。“inone?s＋整十数的复数”表示“在某人几十多岁时”，应用seventies。故将seventy改为seventies。

5．考查非谓语动词。句意同上题。此处应用动词不定式作后置定语，修饰名词decision，adecisiontodosth.表示“做某事的决定”。故在learn前加to。

6．考查形容词。句意：她说她只是想让自己忙起来，尽管从她第一次看到她的前雇主画画起，她就一直有这样的梦想。keep