高考英语复习读后续写练习：建立网站来呼吁更多的人加入捡垃圾的行列 .pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习建立网站来呼吁更多的人加入到捡垃圾的行列1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Onemorningonmywaytoschool,noticedanelderlywomandressedinayellowvest(马甲)carryingagarbagebagandoneofthoserubbishclaws(爪形器具).Whatsthatladydoing?Iaskedmum.VestLady.Shejustpicksuprubbisharoundhereforfun,mumsaid.Whywouldsomeonethinkpickinguprubbishlookinglikeaconstructionworkerisfun?Ipuzzled.ForseveralyearsIdwitnessthismysteriousVestLady—rainorshine—onmywaytoschool.Ihadthoughtshewascrazyforpickinguprubbish.EventuallyIsmiledandwavedathereachtimeIsawher.Later,Imovedtohighschool.ThetimeIsawrubbishhereandthereIfeltreallyannoyed.ThenIdthink,Whyisntanyonepickingupthisrubbish?PeoplearesoinconsiderateIHowever,shortlyafter,Irealizedpickinguptherubbishwasnotsomeoneeasesproblem.4

续写原文NowIcouldntwalkpastlitterwithoutfeelingguilty.Ivolunteeredtocleanuprubbisharoundourschool.Strangeasitmightsound,pickinguplitterwaskindofathrillforme!Infact,Iwassodeterminedthatformy17thbirthdayIboughtmyselfarubbishclaw,reusableglovesandareflectivesafetyyellowvestwithmyownnameonit.Duringmyfirstattemptinmystylishequipment,metwithunfriendlylooksfromothersasifIwereacriminaldoingcommunityservice.Oneday,Ihadanepiphany(顿悟):ImactingjustlikeVestLady!“Buttherewastoomuchrubbisharound,cigaretteendslitteredabout,cansrollingonthestreet,piecesofpaperhiddeninthegrassandplastic.alonewastooweakJHowwouldIgetmorevolunteersinvolvedinrubbishremoval?Asmartideaflashedintomymind.5

段首句Para1:SoonIcreatedmywebsitegopickingupcom.Para2：Moreandmorepeopleonvestswiththeirownnames.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者受到“马甲女士”的影响自己也开始穿着反光黄色安全背心捡垃圾，但是作者很快意识到一个人的力量是不够的，于是作者想到创建网站来号召更多的志愿者加入到清除垃圾的行动中来，获得了巨大的成功。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流