读后续写语篇练习+受邻居影响男孩学会偷汽车，在暖心老人的帮助下改邪归正成为足球运动员 高考英语一轮复习.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习受邻居影响男孩学会偷汽车，在暖心老人的帮助下改邪归正成为足球运动员1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Ihitthebackwindowofanewcarwithahammer.InaflashIwasin.Istartedthecar,justlikemyolderbrotherhadtaughtme.Iwas12then.Itseemscrazynow.Today,everyoneknowsmeasDonaldDriver,afamousfootballplayer.Ivededicated(致力于)mylifeafterfootballtohelpingdisadvantagedkidsaroundthecountry.MomwouldhavekilledmeifshedknownwhatIwasupto.Mydadhadgonetoprisonwhileshewaspregnantwithme.Momwantedabetterlifeforme,mytwobrothersandtwosisters.Sheworkedlonghourstosupportus.Butsheoftenfellbehindonrentandthenwedhavetomove.TroublereallystartedwhenwemovednextdoortoamannamedJ.R.Momtrustedhimtocareuswhileshewasatwork,andhedid.WhatMomdidntknowwasthatJ.R.andhisfriendswerethieves.4

续写原文MyolderbrotherMosesandIservedaslook-outs(放哨人).Weknewitwaswrong,butthemoneywastoogood-$100anight.Webrokeitintosmallerbills,andregularlyslippedsomeintoMomspurse.ThenMosesdiscoveredwecouldbringinevenmorecashbystealingcars.Wepracticedgivingthesamesmile,hugandkissformymomwhenwecamehome,nomatterwhatweddoneonthestreets.Now,though,Iwasabouttogetcaught.Thepolicegotcloser.Iturnedintoabackalley.Suddenly,upahead,acarbackedoutofadriveway.Isawalittleoldladysittinginthedriversseat.Butit,wastoolate.Istoppedandjumpedouttoseeiftheoldladywasdamaged.Thewoman,EvelynJohnson,lookedangry,butunhurt.“Gositinmyhouserightnow,”shesaid.Itwasthetoneofvoicethatnokidcandisobey.Thepolicearrivedandbegantoquestiontheoldwoman.“Themanwhodidthisranthatway,”shesaid,pointingdownthealley.5

段首句Para1：Whenthepolicedroveoff,Para2：Ispentmoretimestudyingandfootballkeptmebusytoo.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8通读短文可知，本文主要讲述的是作者改邪归正的故事。作者的父亲入狱,母亲要努力工作养活五个孩子，没有想到