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高考英语读后续写语篇练习海滩酒吧老板的救赎：拯救少年与丢失的戒指1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文AworriedcallcameintoJimmyGill’sbarthispastMarch.Anewlymarriedwomanwhohadspenttheafternoonatthebeachbarcouldn’tfindherwallet.Shedidn’tcareaboutherID,creditcards,or$150incash-butherweddingringwasputinside.Gilldidn’tliketheideathatatheftcouldhaveoccurredathisplace.Sohesetouttofindthewallet.Hespenthoursscanningfootage(影片片段）from16differentsurveillance(监控)，cameras,watchingthewoman’severystepinthebaruntilshewenttositonabenchoutsideandleftwhenherridearrived.Withinminutes,ayoungmaninajacketapproachedthebench,putsomethinghurriedinhispocket,andwalkedoff.Gillpostedacliponthebar’sFacebookpage.“Ididn’twanttoaccusehim,”hesaid.“Ijustaskedifanybodyknewwhotheguywas.”4

续写原文Withinhours,Gillgotatextfrom17-year-oldRiversPrather,who’dheardaboutthepostfromoneofhisfriends.PratheradmittedhavingtakenthewalletandtoldGillhe’ddoneitbecausehehadn’teatenintwodays.Hesaidhesawtheringbutthoughtitwasfake,sohetookthemoneyandthrewthewalletoffthedock(码头)intotheocean.Thenheboughtasandwich.Gill,unsurewhetherhebelievedPrather,toldtheteentomeethimatthedock.There,theygottotalking,andPratherrevealedthathewasn’tgettingalongwithhisfamilyandhadbeenlivinginthewoodsforaweek.Gill,afatheroftwowithanotherontheway,lookcloselyatPrather-hissmallbuild,hispalecheeks-andsawhimforwhathewas:moreofakidthanacriminal.Butthepolicewerealreadyonthecase,andbecauseofthemissingring,Prathercouldbefacingcharges.“Hewouldbegoingtojail,”Gillsays.“Ihadtohelphimsomehow.”5

段首句Para1：Thenextday,Gillhiredtwodiverstosearchthewaters.Para2：Suddenlyadivercameoutofthewater.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8这篇续写以故事情节发展为线索，海滩酒吧的老板Gill接到投诉，一位女士的钱包被偷，里面有她的订婚戒指。Gill