专题06 书面表达（上海专用）（解析版）.docx

专题06书面表达

1．（23-24高二上·上海·期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是明启中学的学生李明。十月以来，为提升学生体质健康水平，你们学校组织全校学生在早锻炼后，男生做30个俯卧撑（push-ups），女生做3分钟平板支撑（planks）。但有同学反映运动强度过大，身体不适。现学校委托学生会向同学们征集意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。

要求：

1.提出问题；

2.提出改进的建议和理由。

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【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearStudentUnion,

IamwritingtoprovidesomefeedbackonthemorningexerciseroutinethathasbeenimplementedinourschoolsinceOctober.Therehavebeensomeconcernsregardingtheintensityofexercise.Manystudentshavereportedfeelingphysicallyuncomfortable.Thisstrenuousroutinemaybetoodemandingforsomestudents,especiallythosewhoarenotaccustomedtosuchintenseexercise.

Inlightoftheseconcerns,Iwouldliketoproposesomesuggestions.Firstly,theschoolcanvarythetypestocatertodifferentfitnesslevels.Thiscouldincludealternativestopush-upsandplankssuchasjogging,stretching,orotherlessintensesports.Secondly,studentscanbeallowedtochoosetheirpreferredsportswithinagivenrange.Thesemodificationswouldnotonlyaddressthephysicaldiscomfortexperiencedbysomestudentsbutalsopromoteamoreinclusiveandenjoyableexerciseroutineforall.

Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeconsidered.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生给学生会写封邮件，反馈对学校组织的早锻炼的意见，需说明目前存在的问题，提出改进的建议，并提供支撑建议的理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

实施：implement→carryout

适应：beaccustomedto→getusedto,adaptto

鉴于：inlightof→considering,inviewof

选择：choose→pick,optfor

解决：address