+Unit+5+写作课件2024-2025学年沪教牛津版（2024）七年级英语上册.pptxVIP

WhatwouldatriptotheMoonbelike?

Haveyoueverdreamedofatriptospace?

SpaceAdventure

Haveyoueverdreamtoftravellingtospace?Nowcomesyourchance:writeapostaboutyourdreamtripandsendittous.Thewriterofthebestpostwillwinafreetriptospace!

Writingapostaboutadreamtriptospace

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列大纲

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审题

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检查

遣词造句

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1Daviddrewamindmapbeforehewroteabouthisdreamtrip.Completethemind

mapandthenreadtheposttoseeifyouwereright.

Visitingaspace

station

1Daviddrewamindmapbeforehewroteabouthisdreamtrip.Completethemind

mapandthenreadtheposttoseeifyouwereright.

station

引入主题，介绍太空旅行的背景或原因

详细描述太空旅行的过程，包括出发、在太空中的经历看到的景色、进行的活动

总结太空旅行的感受和收获

对未来太空探索的展望

开头

中间

结尾

你可能用得上的单词

·spaceship

·astronaut

·spacestation

·zerogravity

·launch

·orbit

·galaxy

·asteroid

(宇宙飞船)

(宇航员)

(空间站)(零重力)

(发射)

(轨道)

(星系)

(小行星)

Thisiswhatmydreamtriplookslike.

looklike看起来像…,与…相似

基础表达

Thisismydreamtrip.

Om翻译：这是我梦想中的旅行

amm翻译：我们要在睡袋里睡觉

基础表达

Wewillsleepinthesleepingbag.

Thereismuchlessgravity,sowewillhavetotieoursleepingbagstothewallwhenwesleep..

扩句小技巧：加原因+时间

amm翻译：我将欣赏一下外面的景色

基础表达

Iwillenjoytheviewoutside.

句式升级

Whenwearriveatthespacestation,Iwillfirstlookout

ofthewindowsandenjoytheviewoftheEarth.

扩句小技巧：加时间+详细的动作

amm翻译：我希望将来有朝一日能在太空旅游

基础表达

Ireallylookforwardtotravellingintospacesomeday-it

willbeanamazingexperience.

扩句小技巧：短语升级+总结

Ihopetotravelintospacesomeday.

like.First,myfamilyandIwillflyoutintospaceonaspaceship.Whenwegetinto

orbit¹,wewillvisitaspacestation.Itwilltakeusaboutsixhourstogetthere.

Thingsareverydifferentinspace.Thereispuchlessgravity,sowewillhavetotieoursleepingbagstothewallwhenwesleerillalsohavetowashourhandsandbrushourteethinadifferentway.

Whenwearriveatthespacestation,IwillfirokoutofthewindowsandenjoytheviewoftheEarth.Afterthat,