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专题02书面表达20篇

1．（23-24高一上·上海·期末）学校举行作文比赛以你身边敬爱或爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。（字数150）

内容包括：

1、受到敬爱、爱戴的人的简介；

2、说明理由

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【答案】

ThepersonIrespect

Therearealotofpeoplearoundus,whoarerespectable.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonwhoIrespectmostinmyheart.Myfatherisateacher,wholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuchanddevoteshimselftohisworkandstudents.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetokeepmecompanyandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Withhishelpandencouragement,Idowellinmylessons.Heachievedalotinhiswork,andthuswasrespectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonwhoIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校举行作文比赛以你身边敬爱或爱戴的人为题，要求考生按照要求写一篇短文参赛。

【详解】1.词汇积累

很多：alotof→agreatmanyof

值得尊敬的：respectable→venerable

尊敬：respect→honour

陪伴某人：keepsb.company→accompanysb.

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Heachievedalotinhiswork,andthuswasrespectedbyhisstudents.

拓展句：Becauseheachievedalotinhiswork,hewasrespectedbyhisstudents.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Therearealotofpeoplearoundus,whoarerespectable.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.（运用了When引导的时间状语从句）