【期末备考】Unit 1—10单元写作指南（含范文评讲）课件【人教（2024秋）八上英语】.pptxVIP

Unit1—10单元写作指南;单元话题和写作要求;写作指导;MyVacation

Lastsummer,IwenttoBeijingonvacationwithmyfamily.①

Itwassunnyandhot.Thefirstday,wevisitedtheGreatWall.TherewerealotofpeopleontheGreatWall.Itisthelongestwallintheworld.WelearnedaboutthehistoryoftheGreatWall.HowgreattheChinesepeoplewere!Thesecondday,wevisitedthePalaceMuseumandTiananmenSquare.Wetookquiteafewphotosthere.②WealsowenttosomeotherplacesofinterestinBeijing.Wehadagreattimeinthatcity.③

Thoughwewereverytired,weenjoyedourselves.WehopetovisitBeijingagainsomeday.④

【诊断分析】

①开门见山地点明了文章主题,引出下面的内容。

②文中使用thefirstday,thesecondday,also等词(组)来表达事件发生的顺序,紧扣主题,条理清晰。thelongestwall和Howgreattheancientpeoplewere!自豪地表达出了长城的举世瞩目及中国人民的伟大,夺人眼球。

③placesofinterest略写了北京其他好玩的地方,固定词组使用准确,hadagreattime表达了作者度假后的感受。

④作者用enjoyedourselves,hopetovisitBeijingagain来结束全文,对此次度假做出了很好的总结。在表达了虽劳累但很开心的感受的同时,也谈了自己的愿望,很不错。;单元话题和写作要求;写作指导;EarlyRising

Earlyrisingisgoodforusinmanyways.①

First,itishealthyforthe:mindandthebody.Wedomorningexercisetokeepushealthy.Itsalsogoodtotakeawalkalongthestreet.②Second,earlyrisinghelpsuswithstudies.Whenwegetupveryearlyinthemorning,everythingaroundisquiet.Wecanlearnquicklyandmemorizethingseasily.③Third,earlyrisinggiveusenoughtime.Wecanhavearelaxingbreakfastsowedontneedtorush.④

SoIthinkitsimportantforustogettingupearly.⑤

【诊断分析】

①开门见山地提出了本文的论点:早起有益。

②此处Firstly与下文Secondly,Thirdly的使用使文章显得很有层次感。suchas用得非常恰当,是一个得分亮点。跳绳这个例子举得不错,同时俗语跳绳踢毽,身体康健的引用提升了文章质感。

③这一段详细地写了早起的好处,特别是对于学习的好处。谚语一日之计在于晨引用到位。quickly和easily两个副词也用得很准确。

④sothat与havearelaxingbreakfast用词高级。

⑤itsimportantforustoformthehabitofgettingupearly为Ithink引导的从句,从句的运用使得文章简洁有力,同时在文章结尾处再次表达了自己的观点,照应了文章开头。;单元话题和写作要求;写作指导;MyFriendandI

MynameisJack.Andyismybestfriend.①

Insomewayswearethesame.Bothofuslikemusic.Andwearegoodatsinging.Wearealsogood