英语专四作文写作辅导.pptVIP

专四写作辅导2商英教研室内容一复习二模板识记、积累检查二如何制造亮点词语三如何制造亮点句型PARTONE复习模板识记、积累检查PARTTWO如何制造亮点词语1选用具体的词平时学习时，就要注意积累具体词，并使之成为活跃词汇。这样实战时，才能随手运用。goodfoodpktasty/freshfood原句：Noonesawthebankbeingbrokeninto.优化：Noonewitnessedthebankbeingbrokeninto.原句：Pleasetryourbesttohelpthisgirl,helphertopassthemostdifficultperiodinlife,andmakeherfinancialburdenlessandless.优化：Pleasetryourbesttohelpthisgirl,helphertopassthemostdifficultperiodinlife,andrelieveherfinancialburden.学习时，注意区分含义的微妙差异，从而在运用时，用词恰当。原句：Nuclearproliferationisalwaysthetopproblemtheparticipantshavetodiscussatthiskindofmeeting.2注意区分近义词01issue[atopicthatisoftendiscussedorarguedabout,especiallyasocialorpoliticalmatterthataffectstheinterestsofalotofpeople]尤指社会或政治方面的〕议题；争论的问题?Abortionisahighlycontroversialissue.堕胎是个很有争议的话题。pkproblem[asituationthatcausesdifficulties]I’vebeenhavingafewproblemswithmycar.?→issue023学会活用不同的词性汉语则较多使用动词、形容词，而英语中常用名词。所以，要想地道、制造亮点，要学会多用名词原句：Afterweobservedthemcarefullyandanalyzedthemcritically,wemayidentifytheconceptionsthatwillactuallycontributetothesocialdevelopment.优化：Throughcarefulobservationandcriticalanalysis…限定用语的使用可以使论述更加客观、适度，避免观点的绝对化，提高说服力和可信度。4恰当使用限定用语mainly,generally,ingeneral,typically,mostly,almost,forthemostpart;may,maybe,perhaps,probably;sometimes,tosomeextent,tosomedegree…常见的限定词：I’dliketomakeeveryefforttoletmorepeopleknowtheideathatwasteisdisgraceful,andcallonallmyschoolmatestofightagainstwaste.(用更具体的词)I’msureyouwillsoonfindagoodcandidatefortheposition.(用更具体的词)Peoplewhoaregoodatdealingwithsocialrelationsadmittheirmistakes,andtaketheirshareofblame.(用介词短语改写)亮点词语改写练习如何制造亮点句型在实际写作中,一味地采用长句或短句都是不可取的,要长短句交替使用。开头结尾：用长句，吸引阅卷老师注意力正文：一般来说,写作中是以简单句为基础,适当配以并列句和复合句。030102长句短句搭配使用长句含有许多修饰语,适合表达准确而复杂的思想,解释观点或理论,描写细致的事物。1写作时