高考英语读后续写灾难故事类 勇敢少年和姐姐在火灾中救助老人课件(共22张PPT)（含音频+视频）.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习灾难故事——勇敢少年和姐姐在火灾中救助老人1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Jackstillremembersthatonemorningwhenhewasonlytenyearsold.HewasathomewithhiseldersisterLily.Jackwasdoinghishomeworkwhenheheardraisedvoices.Atfirst,hethoughtnothingofitsincecustomersvoiceinthemotorcycleshopdirectlybelowtheirflatoftenbecameloud,buthesoonrealizedthistimeitwasdifferent.“Quick!Quick!Removethemotorcyclesfromtheshop.”someoneshouted.Thenathickburningsmellfilledtheair.WhenJackopenedthefrontdooroftheirflattoinvestigate,athickcloudofsmokegreetedhim.Themotorcycleshophadcaughtfireandpeoplewererunningandcrying.Lily,whohadbeenplayingtheviolininherroom,hurriedtothelivingroom.Theyrushedoutofthedoorandalongthecorridorthroughthesmoke.TheywereheadingtowardsthestairwayatthefarendofthecorridorwhenLilystoppedinhertrack.Sheturnedaroundandheadedbackthewaytheycame.Jackhadnoideawhatshewasdoing,buthefollowedher.4

续写原文Lilyhadsuddenlyrememberedtheladyinher70swholivednextdoortothem,whotheycalledMakcik,Malayforauntie.LilybeganbangingonMakcik’sdoor,butgotnoanswer.Asthesmokethickenedaroundthem,Jackcouldseemanyoftheirneighbors—somestillintheirpyjamas—runningforsafety.Thethoughtoffearcrossedhismind.“Shemighthaverunforsafetylikeeveryoneelse!”Jackcried.However,Lilyrefusedtogiveup.“IknowMakciksstillinside.”ShesaidshewasfamiliarwithMakciksdailyroutineandwascertainshewouldstillbesleeping.Shepoundedthedoor.“Godownstairs.Gonow!Go!”5

段首句Paragraph1：Justatthattime,Jacknoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Paragraph2：Luckily,alltheneighborswentdownstairsandanambulancecame.6

Part2题目分析7

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8

续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者杰克十岁那年的一个早晨，他和姐姐