玩手机-读后续写 课件高三下学期英语二轮复习专项.pptx

读后续写

写作指导;主题语境：人与自我;1;01;;;;;;;;;;;;;

1.Enjoyingthenatureandyouwillfeeltherealhappiness.

2.Ineverfeltpleasurelikethosedays.

3.Iwasshockedbythecharmingofthenature.

4.Wewerepickedwildvegetables.

5.Weweretookphotos.;典型错误分析

词性不分，语态混淆

句式单一

时空跨度大

情节设计不走心

过去式错误;Insteadofburyingmyselfinmyphone.Ifocusedonsomethingelse:mysurroundings.Theblueskywithmilkycloudsfascinatedmewiththegentlewindbrushingmyface.Thelakearounduswasclean,whichhasthereflectionofthetreesandflowersinfullbloom.IwassoabsorbedintothescenerythatIforgotthephonethoroughly.ThemoreIexplored,thehappierIwas.ItwasntlongbeforeIwaskeenongoingbacktonature

Thefourdayspassedinaflash,tullitfunactivities.whatIdidmademegetakickfromthoseactivities.Andnotonlydidthetravelgetusclosetonature,italsopromotedthelovebetweenourfamilies.IknewIwasexpectedtomakechangestonotliveonthephoneandburymyselfinitsscreenanymore.Nomatterwherelifetookus,wewouldalwaysstrivetohavetheeyestofindnature;;;02;;;03;;;;;Haveataste;Chooseoneofthepoemsandwriteashortessayaboutit.;写法一

一篇较完整的诗歌赏析类文章包含如下内容：;写法二

采用这种写法时，作者只需要抓住其中一个方面，如意境、语言表达、某一手法等。对于其他方面则可不提及，因而采用这种写法的文章篇幅一般较短小。;Writing;AmongallofChinasclassicpoems,thepoemATranquilNightmightbeoneofthemostlikedandrecited,whichwaswrittenbythefamouspoetLiBaiofTangDynasty.Theshortpoemvividlydescribesthefeelingofbeinghomesickafterseeingabrightmoonwhenthepoetwastravelling.Inthepoem,thepoetusedabed,moonandfrosttocreateaclearpicture,whichexpressesastrongfeelingoflonelinessandhomesickness.Besides,simplebutartfulwordsareusedtoconveysincerefeelings,likedrowned,leavingsomethingtotheimagination.Moreimportantly,rhymingcoupletsmakethepoemeasytoremember.

;焦虑地环顾四周，我差不多要哭出来了。

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