教学课件高三英语作文训练.pptVIP

高考快递NMET书面表达评分标准：第五档(很好)(21-25分)完全完成了试题规定的要求。—覆盖所有的内容要点。—应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。—语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构和较高级词汇所致，具有较强的语言运用能力。—有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。一、适当地使用一些单词、词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采，丰富语气的表现力。1.Anewbuildingisbeingbuiltinourschool.2.Hepretendednottoseetheprettygirl.hearwhatIsaid.Heturnedablindeyetotheprettygirl.adeafeartowhatIsaid.Anewbuildingisunderconstructioninourschool.Writingbeautifulsentences3.Itisrainingheavily.4.ThePRCwasfoundedintheyear1949.Itisrainingcatsanddogs.Theyear1949sawthefoundationofthePRC.二、尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词。1.Ilikereadingwhilehelikesplayingfootball.2.Whensummercomes,thedayisgettinglongerandlonger,andthenightisgettingshorterandshorter.Ilikereadingwhileheenjoysplayingfootball.Whensummercomes,thedayisgettinglongerandlonger,andthenightshorterandshorter.Hardworkingandcareful,thegirlpassedthetest.It’sIwhohithimintheface.HowgladI’mthatyouhavemadesomuchprogress.三、可适当地打破常规，用一些倒装句、强调句或感叹句,可以为文意的表达增添一点新意。1.Thegirlwashardworkingandcareful,andshepassedthetest.2.Ihithimintheface.3.Iamgladthatyouhavemadesomuchprogress.四、使用主从复合句、分词、不定式等来代替简单句，能使书面表达行文更加流畅有力。Helayonthegrass,countingthestarsinthesky.Inordertopasstheentranceexamination,wearestudyinghard.Helayonthegrass,countingthestarsinthesky.1.Hewasveryhumorous.Weallliketoplaywithhim.2.Wearestudyinghardinordertopasstheentranceexamination.3.Helayonthegrassandcountedthestarsinthesky.五、改变句子开头方式，适当地把一些成份提前位于句子的开头，使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏，增加书面表达的表现力。Betweenthetwobuildingsstoodatemple,inwhichanoldmonklived.Onthesurfaceoftheriverisfloatingtheremains