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**沙场练兵实战演练Module8写作能力提升练cometrue提示内容提示词 回顾过去1.性格上的改变2.学习上的成就3.反思不足1.outgoing,getonwith2.learnfrom,makeprogress3.wastetime,notunderstand 展望未来未来的期望cometrue［审题指导］1.Who:班会上的同学们2.Why:回顾初中三年生活，展望未来3.What:内容提示（①回顾过去；②展望未来）4.G（体裁）：应用文（演讲稿）5.T（时态）：回顾过去：一般过去时；展望未来：一般将来时6.P（人称）：第一人称为主7.S（结构）：三段式［思路构建］Dearstudents,Howtimeflies!Lookingbackatthesepastthreeyears,Ihaveimprovedalot.IusedtobesoshythatIdidn’tdaretoexpressmyselfinpublic.Butwithmyteachers’encouragement,Ihavenotonlybecomemoreoutgoing,butalsobeenabletogetonwellwithpeoplearoundme.［精彩范文］Besides,IoftenlearnedfrommyclassmatessoImadegreatprogressinmystudies.However,Ialsowastedmuchtimeinplayingcomputergames.Whatwasworse,Icouldn’treallyunderstandmyparents,alwaystalkingbacktothemloudly.Butnow,everythinghaschanged.Imakeadecisiontostudyhardertomakemyparentsproudofme.Ibelievemydreamwillcometrue.1.文章要点丰富齐全，结构严谨。usedtobesoshy,moreoutgoing,getonwellwith,makegreatprogress等形象展现了作者三年的收获与成长。除此之外，besides,however等衔接词使文章错落有致、衔接紧凑。2.文章语言丰富。作者灵活运用了感叹句、结果状语从句和宾语从句表达不同的心境。高分点评：三年的初中生活即将结束，我们的点滴成长和进步离不开家长的悉心照顾和支持、老师的辛勤教诲和鼓励，以及其他人对我们的帮助。请根据思维导图的提示，以“ThePersonIWanttoThankMost”为题，写一篇英语短文。参考词汇:kind,easy-going,takecareof,encourage,cheerup,bethankfulfor,tryone’sbest,...要求:词数不少于80。开头已给出，不计入总词数。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThePersonIWanttoThankMostInmyjuniorhighschoollife,alotofpeoplehavehelpedme.Ith