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Theenvironmentproblemsfacingtodaysworldaresogreatthatthereislittle

ordinarypeoplecandotoimprovethesituation.Governmentandlargecompanies

shouldberesponsibleforreducingtheamountofdamagebeingdonetothe

environment.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?环境

a，b改变人民的行为，c保护环境

A环境b促进公司技术创新c减少污染保护环境

A个人提高环保意识b改变行为参与环保活动c有利于修复环境

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Financialaidsby（aid不可数名词）governmentsalsohelptoimproveenvironment

（没有这样的表达）,whichpromptfirmstoadoptorresearch

environmentally-friendlytechnologies（RESEARCH这个词用错了）inorderto

reduceenvironmentalissues（搭配错）.Thetechnologytosolveenvironmental

problemscostsalargeamountofmoneysothatcompaniescannotaffordthe

expenses.Therefore（没有逻辑关系）,governmentsubsidiescanboosttechnological

innovation.Forexample,itenabsomefirmstopurifysewageinordertobereused

（reuse的主语不是it不能省）andtoapplyenergy-savingtechnologies.Thiscan

reducedifferentpollutions（没有这样的表达）.

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Government（缺冠词或少复数）shouldbeinchargeofenvironmentalissues,

becauseithaslaw-makingpower（应该是right）whichisimportantto

environmentalconservation.Enactingalawcanhelpgovernmenttochangepeople’s

behavior.Forexample,itrequirespeopletopayextramoneyforusingsticbags

ordrivingprivatecars.Peoplemaybeunwillingtopayformoneyonthesethings,

therebytheywillpreparetheirownbagsandtakebusesinsteadofdrivingcars

（thereby+分词结构起状语作用）.Thiscanalleviatetheenvironmentalimpacton

ourworldandleadtoagreenlifestyle（搭配不对）.

世界的环境问题如此严重，普通人几乎为力来改善这种状况。政

府和大公司应该负责减少对环境造成的破坏。您在多大程度上同意或不同意？

环境

a，b改变人们的行为，c保护环境

环境b促进公司技术创新c减少污染保护环境

A个人提高环保意识b改变行为参与环保活动c有利于修复环境

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