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中考英语满分作文

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本卷完形填空A)文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文

章的最后指出：“Weneedtojudgepeoplebywhattheydo,not

whattheylooklike.”你同意文章最后提出的观点吗?对此观点你有

何看法?请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，

并举例说明。

写作要点:

I.Youropinion(agree/disagree/…);

2.Reasons(looks,personality品性,ability…);

3.Anexample(yourself/apersonaroundyou/afamous

person/…).

要求:

1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适

当发挥;

2.如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名;

3.词数不少于80。

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满分作文：

Iagreewiththeopinion.Comparedwithlooks,personalityand

abilityaremoreimportant.Becausewecan’tchangeourlooks

easily,butwecandecideandcontrolwhatwedo.Thankstothe

kindandhard-workingpeople,oursocietyisbecomingbetterand

better.

Forexample,MaYun,awell-knownbusinessman,doesn’tlook

handsome,buthecreatedAlibabawhichhaschangedourlifestyle

andmadeourlifemoreconvenient.Hehasbeendoingsomuchfor

oursocietythatwealladmirehim.Becauseofhiscontributionto

oursociety,weeventhinkhelookssocool.

Solet’stryourbesttodomoreusefulthingsforoursocietyandpay

lessattentiontoourlooks.

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满分作文：

Inmyopinion,Ithinkweneedtojudgepeoplebybothwhatthey

doandwhattheylooklike.

Apersonspersonalityandabilityareveryimportant,butforsome

jobs,looksarealsoimportant,suchasanactororanactress,a

waiterorawaitress,orevenateacherBecauseitsenjoyabletosee

agood-lookingperson

Forexample,myteachersinmyclassallteachverywell,andthey

arekindandhelpful.Allofuslikethem.Butthemostpopular

teacherismyEnglishteacher,becauseshelooksreallybeautiful.

Shedressesherselfupeverydayandalwayshasasmileonherface

Soletstryourbesttoimproveourability,personalityandlooks.

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假定你是李华，收到英国笔友Harry的邮件，获悉他在机器人制

作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数80左右。