FNO高中三年级英语 写作指导.pptVIP

Happiness Happiness means different things to different people. For example, some students believe that if they have a lot of money or large possessions, they will be happy. They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money. Some students think that they should be in good health, and do whatever they like. Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents. In this way, they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything. A sample I don’t quite agree with the above points. I don’t think money means happiness. We can’t buy everything with money, such as health, love and knowledge. I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can make great contributions to our society with knowledge. Although different people value happiness differently, my “wealth” of happiness is in my study. Homework 假设你是李华。最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论太空探险的意义。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况。请你用150字左右给该报写一封信，客观地介绍讨论结果，并简要地表达你自己的观点。 一些同学赞同 一些同学反对 你自己的观点 ●获得新的知识 ●耗资巨大 ？ ●从太空取得新资源 ●宇航员的安全问题 ●扩大人类的生存空间 ●太空垃圾问题 We’re tough. We’re strong. We can endure anything. 高 三 英 语 写 作 指 导 江苏省靖江高级中学 宋海英 Tasks To learn about some requirements for an excellent composition To know how to write a good open-ending part To know how to write a good essay 五档作文评分标准: 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到预期的写作目的。 Main points of a beautiful composition: 1. 要点齐全 2. 词句优美 3. 开放部分思想深刻，内容丰富 4. 过渡恰当 5. 书写认真 Steps of writing a composition: 1 审题 体裁，人称，时态； 篇章框架 2 写点 6-10个得分点，千万不可遗漏； 写出动词短语 3 连词成句，连句成文 4 用短文改错的精神修改作文 疏于审题，随意动笔，涂改严重，等于自杀 How to write good sentences 1. 使用较高级词汇 She doesn’t like sports. She cares nothing for sports. When he heard she died, he went pale with sorrow. At the news of her death, he went pale with sorrow. She can’t pronounce the word correctly. She has difficulty in pronouncing the word. 2. 运用较复杂结构：被动语态，非谓语动词，从句，倒装句，强调句，虚拟语气等 People suggest that the conference be put off